LJ Idol // Week 16 // Open Topic

[serpentpixie]

The Flyaways

A short and peculiar narrative.

Music: The Queen by Taylor Hayward.

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Comments

[tigrkittn]

I never know what to say about your videos! So melancholy and misty and ... sepia-toned. I just love them.

[comedychick]

I never know what to say, too. I love them, but that's about all I manage to say in the comments!

[serpentpixie]

(You know, that's usually a good enough comment, right?!)

[serpentpixie]

I'm glad you like it!! :)

[comedychick]

Love this, as always. So I decided I should subscribe to your YouTube channel because I find that's the best way for me to go back and find stuff I want to watch again :)

[serpentpixie]

:D I saw!! It made me smile :) I'm glad you like it!

[myrna_bird]

I read the text first and then watched the video. It was very powerful to me, in that order. What an amazing story. I am planning to research it some more on my own. Good job putting it together!

[serpentpixie]

... Well you could research it yourself, but pretty much everything I'm doing here is fictional ^^
I'm glad you like it, though!! :)

[myrna_bird]

Well you sure fooled me. I read it as real as could be and even thought I had heard of it before. That there was a family of peole from the forest...well, whatever. I still enjoyed this a lot. :)

[serpentpixie]

... I think... most stories have some element of fact in them - all I ever aim for in my writing is for the story I'm telling to feel true, so I'm not at all disappointed that you thought this was based in factual events!
:)

[imafarmgirl]

This was different. I liked it and would have liked more.

[serpentpixie]

I liked it and would have liked more.
Me too!! I'm going to develop this initial idea into something bigger, I think - it's certainly got a lot of as-yet-unexplored narrative potential :)

[basric]

Very original. I liked it.

[serpentpixie]

:) Thank you! :)