LJ Idol // Week 25 // Uncarved Block

May 12, 2011 23:47

I should say that this is a companion piece to my Round Two Entry, but you don't need to read that to read this one.

Days at the Edge of the UniverseLysander Greenwood was the sort of boy for whom taking things apart was a perfectly normal way to spend a Sunday afternoon. Very occasionally, if he could be bothered, he thought to put things back ( Read more... )

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ecosopher May 12 2011, 23:36:33 UTC
This seemed so clear, what Percival was seeing. Very well done.

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lawchicky May 13 2011, 02:59:02 UTC
Very eerie!

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basric May 13 2011, 03:37:59 UTC
Well written, as usual.

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wyliekat May 13 2011, 13:08:40 UTC
I can actually imagine how it looked, this scene. The wireless and the voice emerging, somewhere on a rooftop. The whole story has a vintage feel to it. ;-}

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beeker121 May 13 2011, 20:59:33 UTC
I love the message, and the idea of talking into the void having no idea if anyone can hear you or not. I wonder how often Lysander listened to the wireless after that hoping for more...

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