Omg this was such a beautiful story! To me it had a bittersweet ending that just perfect and i cannot wait for your Joon's POV story :) you are an amazing writer ^__^
And I cannot wait to write the Joon POV story! I've had bits and pieces of it running through my head while writing this one, and it'll be nice to finally be able to stop shunting it aside. *g*
dude, it is SO much better than the ending that i was contemplating when i whined to you about short-term resolution + long sequel vs. long resolution + no sequel, which would have been thunder acceding to joon out of guilt (over deceiving joon, over using hongchul as his let's-sleep-with-the-most-convenient-person-to-clear-my-head guy way back when) and then having to deal with a far more fucked up relationship in the sequel, because honestly at this point joon doesn't KNOW thunder; he's been missing some pretty significant info. and even if he knows both pieces of thunder, it's not like he can just easily combine them in his head to come up with a truer image. (seriously, i try in my head with people like you, like zoos, and it just squicks me out -- PLEASE DON'T EVER LET ME FIND OUT THAT YOU WERE MY CHILDHOOD FRIEND ELLEN KTHX. joon actually gets over it far too quickly imo, but if this story went on longer they'd both be middle-aged before getting any action. >_
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Um, okay, can I just kidnap you and make you write MBLAQ forever? ... I was going to end the comment there, since I can't think of anything else to write, but you deserve so much more. My heart, like, hurts--this is so raw and candid and I can't even string the right words together to describe how I'm feeling about your fic. I mean, Sanghyun, Changsun, why do you do this to me?! So yeah. Flailing cut short--I loved it. Please write more. (:
Oh, and just wondering, unrelated--what html do you use to indent the text on both sides? Also Thunder does look very... unfff-able in glasses. Mmm.
Ahaha, no kidnapping necessary! I do not think I could possibly write more MBLAQ fic than I currently am without winning the lottery and quitting my job. XDXD
I'm so glad you liked the story~ these kids break my heart, too, SO I AM HAPPY TO PASS IT ON. ♥ Thank you v. v. much for the kind comment!
I actually use the lj tag < blockquote > < /blockquote > (without spaces, obv) for the indents; it's extremely useful. *g*
Is it bad that I kind of want Thunder to ruin his eyes so that he'll have to wear glasses all the time? (Okay, that's probably bad. >_>)
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To me it had a bittersweet ending that just perfect and i cannot wait for your Joon's POV story :)
you are an amazing writer ^__^
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And I cannot wait to write the Joon POV story! I've had bits and pieces of it running through my head while writing this one, and it'll be nice to finally be able to stop shunting it aside. *g*
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I was going to end the comment there, since I can't think of anything else to write, but you deserve so much more. My heart, like, hurts--this is so raw and candid and I can't even string the right words together to describe how I'm feeling about your fic. I mean, Sanghyun, Changsun, why do you do this to me?!
So yeah. Flailing cut short--I loved it. Please write more. (:
Oh, and just wondering, unrelated--what html do you use to indent the text on both sides?
Also Thunder does look very... unfff-able in glasses. Mmm.
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I'm so glad you liked the story~ these kids break my heart, too, SO I AM HAPPY TO PASS IT ON. ♥ Thank you v. v. much for the kind comment!
I actually use the lj tag < blockquote > < /blockquote > (without spaces, obv) for the indents; it's extremely useful. *g*
Is it bad that I kind of want Thunder to ruin his eyes so that he'll have to wear glasses all the time? (Okay, that's probably bad. >_>)
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