I hate love-y poetry but.......

[setsero]

I stumbled over my once upon a time
without regard for whispers of firey passion, for flashes of violent red
when abstract fingers brushed my own.

A gentle, subtle flutter
left my being swayed unstable, every sinew coiled tightly
around one smooth peripheral glance.

Comments

[lingua_seele]

wow! This is very very good! Did you write this?!

[setsero]

::feels proud:: hehe yes. (but it's all I have for history notes that day...)

[strinktac]

Very impressive.

[setsero]

why thank you!

[celeriter]

bravo

[rine]

ohhh...me like lots.