dampersnspoons - Delust or Dust 15/15

Jan 07, 2009 14:31

Title: Delust or Dust
Rating: NC-17 for adult language and sexual situations
Warnings: Graphic sex (eventually) Probably blood play. And foul-mouthedness
Season/Pairing: BtVS Season 3, Buffy/Spike, Willow/Oz, Xander/Cordelia, Angel/his discontent, Giles/missing spatula
Spoilers: Starts with the episode Lover's Walk, so anything up until ( Read more... )

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mcdreamy7 January 8 2009, 04:13:00 UTC
A series from you!

Squeeeeee and yey and whoo whoo :)

this is the best news eva & the chapter was great.

all I have to say is Thank You.

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rebcake January 8 2009, 05:51:19 UTC
This was a fitting end, but only because you have promised more. *happy sigh*

I think my favorite part was when Spike twigged that Joyce was teasing him. "Very funny." Yes, it is.

Oh, and welcome to the "Isn't Spike funny when he impersonates Eddie Haskell?" Club. So far, it's you, me, and mere_ubu, since Nov. 2008. We are mighty.

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burnkitty January 8 2009, 10:07:04 UTC
*purrs* Mmm, nice. A series. I can't wait! This chapter was just delightful, the shyness between Buffy and Spike was simply gorgeous. Nicely done, the ending was just perfect!

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*loves* jamalov29 January 8 2009, 13:46:27 UTC
I agree that with that lovely final part the tale feels complete and leaves us in a perfectly satisfying place.Hope , isn't it one the wonderful Spike's qualities ? He doesn't give up, he's fire and determination, and now his love for Buffy is part of his essence. :swoons:

I enjoyed so much the sweet and funny conversation between Buffy and her mother !
“It’s not a date.” She walked into her closet and pulled out her heels, her short black pleated skirt, and her cute white cowl-neck sleeveless top and laid them on the bed. Ah ah!

Also, such a shy side of Spike who meets Joyce was endearing.She has a soft spot for him. :D
You conveyed Spike's desire for Buffy in an adorable way, all frustrated sitting close to her in the cinema. I must say that while I love arrogant Spike , soon-to-be-worshipper of Buffy pleases me to no end.

Damn good night,” he mused to himself. He lit up a cigarette, howled in time with the song, cranked up the volume and drove away with his arm dangling out the driver’s side window, catching the wind in his ( ... )

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brunettepet January 8 2009, 17:57:11 UTC
This was a wonderful ending to this charming, hilarious story. The love story is complicated and heart warming. Buffy's struggle to remain strong and independent despite the claim is well handled, and I'm sure the claim will have long term consequences for both her and Spike. This chapter left the relationship at a good starting point, and I'm delighted that there is going to be more.

Your Joyce is pitch perfectl, and I loved this exchange: “What does this outfit say to you? Mortal enemy or let’s be friends?”

“It says thank you for taking me on a date on a school night, vampire.” I can just see Joyce's crossed arms and the slight frown on her face.

This gave me a laugh: I thought you liked Spike. You had hot cocoa together.”

“I like the Grateful Dead, too, but that doesn’t mean I want them to date my daughter.”

“You like the Grateful Dead?” Yeah, that would have given me pause, too. Not that I don't like the Grateful dead, just, Joyce does? Huh.

This showed how much Spike is struggling, too: “I nicked it, all right ( ... )

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dampersnspoons January 8 2009, 18:02:26 UTC
Do you mind if I friend you so I can keep up on "Power and Prophecy?"

Sure! Come on over! :)

I'm glad you liked this little story of mine and thank you so much for the review! The Cramps songs are wonderful things to get stuck in your head. It's much better than the song I have had stuck in my head for weeks now, which I won't share because you'll get it stuck in your head, too, and will be out for my blood in no time.

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brunettepet January 8 2009, 22:53:39 UTC
Phew, thanks for that. My husband thinks it's funny to share such things. No. No, it's not.

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