"Stir of Echoes"

Mar 06, 2009 19:28

Author: Scarlet Ibis
Title: Stir of Echoes
Rating: PG-15
Season/Pairing: BtVS season 7/Spuffy
Spoilers: Pre “Him.”
Summary:  Ever wonder how Buffy managed to get crazy basement! Spike to Xander’s apartment? [Though not how she asked Xander or got him to agree-that’s another tale, maybe] Maybe how Halloween was spent? No? Well, I answered those ( Read more... )

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empresspatti March 7 2009, 01:42:51 UTC
Very well done!

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ms_scarletibis March 7 2009, 08:27:28 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :D

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lilachigh March 7 2009, 09:01:02 UTC
Yes! I like this a lot. Very nice take on the "how" question.

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ms_scarletibis March 7 2009, 15:32:06 UTC
I'm glad it was worth the gander ;)

Thanks!

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petzipellepingo March 7 2009, 10:45:08 UTC
I just adore these FitB's because they add so much to what we saw - and didn't see - on screen. And she's so sweetly compassionate to him here.

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ms_scarletibis March 7 2009, 15:38:12 UTC
It was just such a big gap between "Selfless" and "Him," that I couldn't leave it hanging there. Thanks :D

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abelina March 7 2009, 17:49:33 UTC
You wrote crazy basement!Spike wonderfully! I think it would be tricky to effectively convey Spike's emotions while keeping him speaking nonsense, but you've done an amazing job of it. I liked the part where Buffy realizes that she is actually out of excuses not to go and see Spike . . . because of course we know she still cares about him, even if things are at a weird place right now.

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ms_scarletibis March 7 2009, 23:03:08 UTC
I had to really think about what he needed to say, so I'm glad it sounded authentic :D Buffy was kind of tough too here--I don't often go venturing in her head.

Thanks :D

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louise39 March 8 2009, 00:27:50 UTC
You caught the rhythm of insane-Spike speech. Then the action-Buffy caught with emotions she doesn't want to handle.

Good job.

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ms_scarletibis March 8 2009, 00:34:09 UTC
I'm glad Spike's speech rang true here.

Thank you :D

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