Comments | seventhave: So, I've been writing... (!)

seventhave

So, I've been writing... (!)

Jul 21, 2008 22:48

Title: Disturb the Universe
Author: seventhave
Rating: PG13 (language)
Pairing: Daisy/Mason (implied), Daisy/George
Summary: Set during "Last Call" and "Always." Alternate ending to "Always", I guess. Daisy is grateful that Ray is finally gone.
Spoilers: Through "Always" (Season 2, ep 14)
Disclaimer: I do not own DLM or the characters. Also, I ( Read more... )

fandom: dead like me, fanfiction, pairing: daisy/george

Comments 12

novak_benson July 22 2008, 04:28:30 UTC

I loved this! I absolutely love Daisy Adair. I'm so glad you wrote this!

seventhave July 22 2008, 04:40:35 UTC

Me too. It took a while for her to grow on me, but now she's my favorite. I can't imagine DLM without Daisy, Daisy Adair.

mercurychkita July 22 2008, 04:36:08 UTC

Squee! Dead Like Me fanfic! Awesome, we need more of these. This was very sweet. You managed to keep them all perfectly in character, and there was some nice little introspection for George even as she was saving the day. And, you know, getting it on with Daisy.

My favourite bit:

"You are always in your own head. It's like you're always talking to yourself.”

I think about this for a second. Am I?

*giggles*

seventhave July 22 2008, 04:39:46 UTC

I would love to take credit for that, but that was totally stolen from the episode. (see disclaimer)

Thanks, though!

s0phi4 July 22 2008, 12:47:49 UTC

This is great! Daisy is such a vulnerable character, and you really captured that well in this fic. I also love how you incorporated some of the lines from the the episode into this, it makes the fic feel like an extension of canon.

seventhave July 22 2008, 22:12:48 UTC

Thank you. Daisy's vulnerability is so wonderful (it's why I love her) and at the root of everything she says and does. I really tried to make that the focus here.

I'm glad you liked the canon aspect...I was really nervous about it!

jessi_08 July 23 2008, 05:40:28 UTC

YAY DLM i so miss the show! you did a great job, i love how you worked the episode(s) into the story, you even had Betty too! i loved it, there really should be more DLM fics out there...its just well perfect. good job.

Ahhh... nice. jude_nightlure July 23 2008, 07:12:05 UTC

Damn, this was the BEST show. I hated that it ended so... meaninglessly. And I always thought there was a little subtext going on between a few of the characters. Damn, I really wish the story had continued. G's redemption, internal life lesions and all that. But this, this is vveeeerrrrryyyy nice. Thank you. :)