Some poems sit and tease you like Aramaic cross-words --- fkn brilliant.
the evening wind dances with drunk tree branches and tussles my hair like trick kid poetry- opulent rhymes sundry & sordid lay across the page, spread-eagle -unreported ---fkn brilliant like woah.
i most definitely feel some kind of 'cold, dead hands' comment needs to be made here...i just haven't put it together yet. but really & for real, i love, respect, admire, etc. the way you write about poetry.
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like Aramaic cross-words
--- fkn brilliant.
the evening wind dances
with drunk tree branches
and tussles my hair
like trick kid poetry-
opulent rhymes
sundry & sordid
lay across the page, spread-eagle
-unreported
---fkn brilliant like woah.
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you're fkn brilliant like dude, where's my car
mating with charlton heston's corpse
on marlon brando's hairpiece.
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i write what i know
and poets know writing poems, i suppose
tra-la-la
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