this is gorgeous. definitely one of my favorites. i love the words & all the crafty internal rhyme. wicked flow. i like how the start feels frantic and the end is all calm.
please, please my internal rhyme is not crafty i think something needs to be intended to be crafty, haha
i am so glad you liked it, it just kind of fell out of me like a poop or a teardrop and i like to share my flatulent art, haha
i think the end slowed down because that's the only part that took more time to write (i had to do some la rambla online studies [even though i've been there])
perhaps crafty isn't the right word. i may have to use two words. yes...two words...they're going to be unintentionally (and) clever. or maybe accidentally (and) brilliant. whateva..i just like the sounds. that it came naturally without premeditation makes it even better. and...you simply cannot have fart without art =D
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i think something needs to be intended to be crafty, haha
i am so glad you liked it, it just kind of fell out of me
like a poop or a teardrop
and i like to share my flatulent art, haha
i think the end slowed down because that's the only part
that took more time to write (i had to do some la rambla
online studies [even though i've been there])
=D
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Happy Birthday Ray!
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