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0senbon_zakura0 December 16 2009, 23:12:22 UTC
Loved the beginning, beautiful description, Lucario is perfectly IC, feminine Reiji at the hot spring was nice!

And this mate be the funniest scene "Although, none of them were as bad as getting hit by a snapped support beam," he admitted. "They were definitely colourful, though. Things you wouldn't imagine, like getting thorns caught in his underwear, getting fingers bitten by a Koiking after sticking his hand in the lake, and even stranger things!"

The little sister thing was heart braking, and Lucario was really nice (again... I really, really like your Lucario)

How you ended it was simply wonderful!

(But I really liked the puns too! vary Pokémon!)

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sewnonheart December 17 2009, 07:04:47 UTC
Uh, wow. Did I ever tell you you're a really, really good reviewer? ^o^;;

T-thanks so much for reading this, it made my day!

Ffff, feminine Reiji. xD

Lucario's awesome. It's got an interesting relationship with Sumomo and I tried to capture that. x3

Thank you! ^///^;

But of course! Pokemon without puns is simply not Pokemon.

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