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sexystudent21

Poetry of the week!

Feb 07, 2006 11:35

Here is another poem for you. I didn't recieve comments on the last so either it sucked and you couldn't tell me or no one had the time to read it. Well I'll try again with this one ( Read more... )

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Even I have a bachelor's in English- limiter3118 February 7 2006, 23:38:28 UTC

I'm not really good when it comes to critiquing poetry; therefore Poetry I usually do not comment on . . .

Me too... fuzzyscribble February 8 2006, 19:06:58 UTC

Poetry is so personal...asking for a deconstruction is in a way asking to have us pick you apart ( ... )

Re: Me too... sexystudent21 February 8 2006, 22:09:15 UTC

Thanks I see your point. These are pretty early poems so I hope you will see an improvement in the later ones that i will post. as you can tell by the date near the title. I like how you described it painting a picture. I often feel that it is like that.