the saddest part of a broken heart isn't the ending so much as the start

[sezzie_dee]

don’t confess (this thing that breaks my heart)
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by sezzie_dee
Fandom: Bones
Rating: pg
Summary: “This she knows as well: she can’t not have him in her life.” The long hard journey from one admission to another, and beyond.
Notes: Parts in the Sum of the Whole and Doctor in the Photo centric. Title taken from the Tegan and Sara song of the same name. Also

Comments

[hoperomantic]

First, I have to say that I loved your fic. It was beautiful and heartbreaking and very well written.

That said, I have to say, even with how nicely you wrote her to character, I still hate Hannah. Not because she's with Booth, but because I just don't like her. Though, in writing she does seem better, so maybe I just don't like the actor's portrayal? *shrug*

But back to your fic. I loved the language that you used, and I like how you gave the whole fic a sort of sweetly melancholy feel over-all.

Thanks for sharing.

[sezzie_dee]

Glad you liked it despite the Hannah hate ;)

[erinya]

There were a couple little moments here that struck me as a little out of character--for some reason, I can't see Brennan putting "fucking" in the middle of a word--but overall, I really enjoyed it. I appreciate stories that don't dismiss or bash Hannah.

[sezzie_dee]

Thanks for the comments - I guess the words do get away from me a little sometimes. Glad you liked, and yay for Hannah appreciation ^^

[gaialy]

nicely written. And it is true, Booth loves Hannah....but I have a feeling that things will change with the sniper episode they have been talking about.

[sezzie_dee]

I'm ridiculously excited for the sniper arc, and any possible BB developments, even if I don't mind Hannah.

Thanks for reading!

[tee86elle]

random but I love you icon - moving even in its simplicity

[insidethestars]

You have me in tears for reasons that aren't solely Booth and Brennan. But thank you. This is beautiful.

[sezzie_dee]

Thank you :)

[a2zmom]

I really like this. And it certainly is a realistic future at this point.

[sezzie_dee]

I think it's a pretty depressing stalemate they're caught in, indeed.

Thanks for reading!