[FANFIC] - KISS ME NOT by SGAMADISON

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TITLE: Kiss Me Not
AUTHOR: sgamadison
FANDOM: Hewligan
PAIRING: John Ash/Jerry Moore (Women's Murder Club/The Closer)
RATING: NC17
SUMMARY: Special Agent John Ash was everything that Jerry Moore would never be. Bad enough that Jerry has been assigned to work with Ash on the Kiss Me Not killer case, but a chance encounter with a strange artifact changes

Comments

[mella68]

I'm so glad you like your fanart. It was fantastic to make art for your wonderful story. I really hope that there will be a sequel in the Hewligan BB.

[sgamadison]

As soon as I finished this story, I began thinking about sequels, which is why I was delighted to hear about the Hewligan BB! :-)

[sherry57]

Wow, what can I say ? My words of thanks seem inadeqaute for such a fantastic piece of work

[sgamadison]

You built so much of their Atlantis characters into this story but with something extra that made them Ash and Moore as well. And you built it up to the most fantastic, sensual, hot, sex scene that I was a puddle of goo on the floor at the end. I absolutely loved it.

You don't know how nice this is to hear. This is the first non-SGA story I've ever written and there was very little canon for either character, so I was concerned that they might turn out like John and Rodney clones. The more I wrote them, the clearer their personalities became to me. :-)

I also worry a bit about my sex scenes. I worry that the will seem repetitious or that no one will find them hot, so this is doubly reassuring. Thank you!

Only I feel as though I should apologize for making you late to pack for your trip!

[starry_diadem]

I loved this. I don't know the Jerry character at all, but liked JF as Ash. It's really good to see how you've taken the characters I do know (so very well!) and created something new and fresh from them. This actually wasn't John and Rodney in the FBI, but a pair of characters who have John and Rodney as their ancestors, so to speak, with recognisable characteristics, but who develop personalities and traits of their own. I found myself really getting into the Jerry/Ash characters and adventures without pining for Atlantis or Wraith or Puddlejumpers. This stands very easily on its own two feet. Well done on that.

I really liked the first time Jerry saw Ash - the *as though someone had put a collar on a panther and was pretending it was a housecat* line, all the more powerful with the number of feline references later! And the Weir Museum? Snerked at that one!

I really enjoyed this. I think there should be more Jerry and Ash stories. So !!!111!!! Rote MOar!!!eleventyone!!!!!!

[sgamadison]

I found myself really getting into the Jerry/Ash characters and adventures without pining for Atlantis or Wraith or Puddlejumpers. This stands very easily on its own two feet. Well done on that.

*claps hands with glee*
Thank you! This is my first venture outside of SGA (outside of McShep, really) and I was horribly intimidated by the prospect at first. Then I became totally enamored and wanted everyone else to love John and Jerry as much as I do. :-)

I really enjoyed this. I think there should be more Jerry and Ash stories. So !!!111!!! Rote MOar!!!eleventyone!!!!!!

This made me laugh. I'm not even sure what it means! But I can assure you, there will be more Ash and Moore in the future. :-)

[busarewski]

I enjoyed this a lot!! Such a great spin on their characters, and loved the cats. I'm also VERY fond of Daniel the Bookstore owner, and hope he turns up again in the sequel(s..?) Loved the mix of SGA related stuff into the Jerry/Ash world, and it was a pleasure to read. Thanks!

[sgamadison]

I like how you suggest there will be more than one sequel; that's very flattering! :-)

I can see sequels though--where they capture the KMN killer, where Daniel helps them research the origins of the strange artifact, where they go back to DC to face Ash's past...I spend many happy moments plotting such events. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this and took the time to let me know--thank you!

[busarewski]

Oh those ideas sound splendid! I look forward to seeing more from you universe. And maybe Daniel runs into Jack somewhere too..?

[sgamadison]

Well, you never know where a hunt for Ancient doohickeys might lead you! :-)

[scarface_]

I never been good at reviewing, but I wanted you to know that you story is absolutely wonderful. Now I am totally caving more John/Jerry stories. :)

[sgamadison]

*bounces*

Thank you! I want more John/Jerry stories too, so your comments here make me very happy!