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One Sweet Love's Drabble Tag

Jan 18, 2009 22:42

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Re: Childhood Dreams, G, no spoilers, 235 words magneticwave January 22 2009, 06:32:48 UTC

ham and cheese sandwiches

Let’s make one thing perfectly clear: he is not stalking herIt’s not his fault that she’s always in the mess when he meets Sheppard and Teyla for a bite to eat, or that occasionally she trips in the hallway and he happens to be nearby to offer her a hand. Or that she’s the one who’s on duty when he needs to be patched up. Or that he’s been in the infirmary overnight enough times to know that she eats ham and cheese sandwiches in the middle of the night shift instead of dinner ( ... )

Re: Childhood Dreams, G, no spoilers, 235 words theporchlife January 22 2009, 07:42:06 UTC

This was great - I love how Ronon decides to wait for her to wake up by eating the sandwich he brought her. Very cute (and I think I'm a total sucker for 'Ronon is kind of a stalker' stories, haha).

Re: Childhood Dreams, G, no spoilers, 235 words magneticwave January 22 2009, 10:57:55 UTC

Thank you so much! He skulks so beautifully, he's really wasted on anything other than being a total stalker.

Re: Childhood Dreams, G, no spoilers, 235 words renisanz January 22 2009, 08:06:44 UTC

This is so wonderfully written. You've begun and ending the fic brilliantly. I love the whole humorous tone throughout, Ronon being in denial and then finally coming to terms with what it is that he's really feeling, which is in fact the weakness of not being able to stay away from Jen. :D This so made me smile. :)

Re: Childhood Dreams, G, no spoilers, 235 words magneticwave January 22 2009, 10:59:26 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed; I love making people smile!

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Re: Childhood Dreams, G, no spoilers, 235 words magneticwave January 23 2009, 04:35:31 UTC

Thanks a bunch!

Re: Childhood Dreams, G, no spoilers, 235 words wander_lust_79 January 22 2009, 22:50:17 UTC

Aww..I love this...Ronon is too cute..and kinda sad...but I love this pairing...yay!

Re: Childhood Dreams, G, no spoilers, 235 words magneticwave January 23 2009, 04:36:01 UTC

Thanks!

Dr. Who?, g, no spoilers, word count 454 wander_lust_79 January 23 2009, 00:40:32 UTC

She picked up the sterile needle and thread when she heard him hiss and take in a sharp breath. She quirked a brow looking at him questioningly, “What?” her words came out a little more annoyed then she intended ( ... )

Re: Dr. Who?, g, no spoilers, word count 454 magneticwave January 23 2009, 04:38:18 UTC

That was so cute! The twist at the end was unexpected but totally worth it, ha! Ronon/Keller spawn always make me happy.

Re: Dr. Who?, g, no spoilers, word count 454 wander_lust_79 January 24 2009, 03:00:35 UTC

hehehe...thanks for reading...Im just getting back into writting and I find going short hard...this was a challange! but glad you read and liked and left feedback! :)

Re: Dr. Who?, g, no spoilers, word count 454 renisanz January 23 2009, 08:07:03 UTC

Yes, Ronon/Keller spawn is definitely cute, and, as mentioned the twist at the end was quite cool. :)

Re: Dr. Who?, g, no spoilers, word count 454 wander_lust_79 January 24 2009, 03:01:02 UTC

thank you so much! :)

Re: Dr. Who?, g, no spoilers, word count 454 blencathra January 23 2009, 09:10:14 UTC

Aww hey, that was lovely. :) Like father, like son. I can just so imagine that.

Re: Dr. Who?, g, no spoilers, word count 454 wander_lust_79 January 24 2009, 03:02:01 UTC

thank you! :) yay!! hehehehe!

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