Naughty (for zinelady)

Dec 26, 2007 23:05

Title: Naughty
Author: vain_glorious
Recipient: zinelady
Rating: PG-13
Prompt used: Daniel/Vala, Santa spanking involved, it can be discipline or kinky, I’m not picky. Anything up to NC-17.
Author’s notes: Unbeta’d, so apologies for egregious errors.

Naughty )

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I couldn't wait... zinelady December 27 2007, 15:48:17 UTC
I'm not sure if I'm supposed to wait until the unveiling of the identities of the authors before replying, but I can't help myself. I squeed when I saw that not only had one story been posted for me, but TWO!

Oh, this was sooooo much fun. I could just feel Daniel's frustration building with Vala. I love the sparks and how she always ties him in knots. hehehe I also loved the lingerie-special ops lady. But the ending was the best:

Vala bit him, and that was the last thing he said until they were sneaking out of the mall several hours later, when Vala suggested they obtain the male version of her teddy.

“No,” he said.

“But your ass looks good in red,” Vala said, and brought her palm down soundly on the subject at the same time.

The image of Daniel in red velvet made my day. Thanks for making my holiday season brighter.

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Re: I couldn't wait... vain_glorious January 4 2008, 06:17:50 UTC
I'm glad you liked!

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idiasm December 27 2007, 17:06:59 UTC
Oh, poor Daniel, thinking he knows better and not actually following his own advice. But he's got such a soft heart when it comes to Vala.

This was cute! I love a good Daniel/Vala dynamic.

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evesharmony December 28 2007, 01:40:10 UTC
The first line already had me giggling (and yes, I believe Teal'c would do just that if we was bored!). And then this:

And he was holding her hand - which was something nice and romantic, something she always tried to do when it was inappropriate, like in the Gateroom

BOL! And:

In doing so, he was of course holding it up by its plastic boobs.

The whole thing about the saleswomen wearing the headset was made of awesome - those people still freak me out!

Yay!

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