Seduction, Jack-Style (for zinelady) [fic #2]

[sg1jubileemods]

Title: Seduction, Jack-Style
Author: raqs
Recipient: zinelady
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Rating: R (spanking)
Prompt: Jack comes up with a fun way to get Daniel out of his office to enjoy the snow.

Comments

Thanks!

[zinelady]

Oh, my. I think my fever is rising. There has to be a reason I'm getting all hot and bothered. *grins* Daniel getting spanking by Jack always takes me to my happy place. I loved how it was the 'not taking out the garbage' that was the reason Daniel got spanked...that and the idea was that he deliberately didn't take out the trash just so he could get spanked.

I loved it all, but I think my favorite line that hit me harder than any of the others was:

"You could have made a snowman any time in the last, what, seven winters, at least if you hadn't gone off to be dead," Jack had told him, which had caused Daniel to kiss him, rather a lot, and then neither of them had slept for a while.

I love it when writers touch on how Daniel's deaths affect Jack.

Thanks so much for writing for me.

[idiasm]

Oh, I love how well they know each other, all the little tells in their speech that give them away to each other but not to others, all the gestures they make. Yay!

[evesharmony]

This was great! I can so picture the exchange that revolves around this line: And he raised one eyebrow in a way that might have looked somehow innocent to someone standing by but which looked like pure personal filthy invitation to Daniel. and how Daniel honestly tries to keep working.

There's a real honest affection between them that comes through crystal clear.

[dirty_diana]

I, too, love the affection, there's so much LOVE there and they both know it. *And* I love the banter, it's all so classically Jack. And you rock for writing this one, thanks.

[sarkka]

This was nice =)