Whee, thank you so much, I liked it. This is your first fanfic? Wow, extra cuddos to you!
Don't you feel bad for it being 'late', I took on a back-up fic, too... *attempts to hide almost empty text file from view*
The characters were wonderfully in-character and I really enjoyed the dialogue and the plot.
The attraction between Teyla and Daniel when he notices it felt a bit rushed, as did some parts of the plot, so I suppose that's where you trimmed the story :) If you ever put those deleted scenes up, please tell me, I'd be delighted to read them.
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Don't you feel bad for it being 'late', I took on a back-up fic, too... *attempts to hide almost empty text file from view*
The characters were wonderfully in-character and I really enjoyed the dialogue and the plot.
The attraction between Teyla and Daniel when he notices it felt a bit rushed, as did some parts of the plot, so I suppose that's where you trimmed the story :) If you ever put those deleted scenes up, please tell me, I'd be delighted to read them.
Whee Daniel/Teyla! :) Thank you again.
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