My first post here...

Jan 16, 2005 20:02

Title: Year Six
Author: Ilana
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Nothing past sixth season.
A/N: I feel I should warn you that this is very depressing, with no happy bits to make it better. Thanks to lyssie for the beta.

It was the year that broke them... )

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surreallis January 17 2005, 02:09:58 UTC
I enjoyed that. A nice angsty read. It's honestly one way I could see the team ending. As horrible as it sounds, I like that when one goes down, the rest go down too.

Well written! :)

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pashoshi January 17 2005, 12:32:40 UTC
As much as I like SG-1 surviving and being happy, the odds are much more in favor of a more depressing ending (except for the fact that they're the main characters and are therefore protected from any lasting harm). I'm glad you didn't mind me showing that. :-)

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katcorvi January 17 2005, 02:20:49 UTC
Very good. Dark is fine when it's this well done.

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pashoshi January 17 2005, 12:49:18 UTC
*grins* Thanks. I just feel like I should warn people so they know what they're getting into.

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ex_danvers514 January 17 2005, 09:38:25 UTC
I quite liked this. It was an interesting take, especially with Oma out of the picture, which meant ascended Daniel was never around too. Yeah, good stuff.

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pashoshi January 17 2005, 12:28:43 UTC
Did it sound like Oma was out of the picture? I meant it to sound like she was there, but Daniel just decided not to ascend. Maybe that wasn't clear.

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ex_danvers514 January 17 2005, 12:31:48 UTC
I mean, his choice to not accept ascension. He doesn't ascend, therefore he's not around when Ba'al tortures Daniel and when Teal'c's part of that massacre.

I got that she was there, but if Daniel doesn't ascend, that makes her out of the picture, right? ;-)

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pashoshi January 17 2005, 12:47:48 UTC
Oh, okay. You had me worried for a minute that I'd made it all confusing.

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inyron January 17 2005, 17:59:44 UTC
I enjoyed this, but I do love dark. And what-ifs are one of my favorite type of AUs. I liked the last paragraph too, because they would have to replace SG-1, but no matter how best or brightest, it would be painful.

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agentotter January 18 2005, 21:24:44 UTC
Mmmm, angsty and delicious. Nice work. :)

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pashoshi January 18 2005, 22:02:36 UTC
Thanks.

(Also, randomly, I love that icon.)

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