Rodney convinces John to try bondage only to get so into it he fails to notice John's trying to use his safe word and can't because Rodney gagged him. Prefer John's POV, if possible.
Trust Me (John/Rodney, sex continuing after safe word used but not heard)
anonymous
August 30 2010, 15:26:48 UTC
Rodney says, "Please," and, "I know you'll like it,"and John kind of suspects even then that he probably won't, but Rodney also says, "Trust me," and that's not something that Rodney says unless he really wants what he's asking for
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Trust Me (John/Rodney, sex continuing after safe word used but not heard) (Part 2)
anonymous
August 30 2010, 15:28:48 UTC
Rodney grins at him, pleased and proprietary. "God, you're hot like this. I knew you would be. You look..." He trails off, but he looks happy, and that eases some of John's uncertainty. He wonders why, amongst the stuff he has done, he's never done this
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Re: Trust Me (John/Rodney, sex continuing after safe word used but not heard) (Part 3)gaffsieAugust 30 2010, 16:33:36 UTC
Ouch! That really hurts, precisely because you make it seem so plausible. It's way too easy to picture Rodney doing something like that; not because he's a bad person, but because he gets too lost in what he wants.
That ability he has to steam-roll over John's objections could so easily backfire, just the way it did on Doranda.
Re: Trust Me (John/Rodney, sex continuing after safe word used but not heard) (Part 3)
anonymous
August 30 2010, 18:42:54 UTC
Utterly, absolutely perfectly what I hoped for when I posted this prompt! Rodney makes a mistake, but John does too, accepting the gag without arranging some other way to safe word, and I can so easily see something like this happening. The ambiguity of whether this is a relationship breaking point at the end is great, John holding back hurtful words because he does still care works for me, but also not being able to be in the same room.
Re: Trust Me (John/Rodney, sex continuing after safe word used but not heard) (Part 3)
anonymous
August 31 2010, 04:13:24 UTC
You're supposed to be careful. Even in his thoughts, he can't add, with me.
Oh, ouch. This was really, really great, Anon! And while I do love the quick punch it packs now, if you ever wanted to expand this more, I'd love to read it...
Re: Trust Me (John/Rodney, sex continuing after safe word used but not heard) (Part 3)
anonymous
September 14 2010, 23:57:25 UTC
This makes me want to treat John as if he were very, very fragile. And it makes me want to slap Rodney for not thinking and getting himself too involved to notice distress. Of course, as always you are fair, because John didn't exactly use the best judgement, either. Still ...
Re: Trust Me (John/Rodney, sex continuing after safe word used but not heard) (Part 3)bironicSeptember 15 2010, 00:10:23 UTC
Oh, boy. Yeah. Especially since the last time Rodney asked John to trust him, he let him down too -- also despite his best intentions -- because he was too wrapped up in himself. Nice foreshadowing. I like that things are unresolved here and that John has Teyla to turn to.
Re: Trust Me (John/Rodney, sex continuing after safe word used but not heard) (Part 3)
anonymous
September 15 2010, 00:42:55 UTC
This is so plausible it's scary. Because it happens, and John wasn't at all at fault, here; Rodney was the experienced one, John had never done this, before, and he didn't know what he should have thought through and arranged for. He trusted Rodney for that, to take care of everything and make it all safe for him, because Rodney said he would. And then Rodney got caught up in himself, again, and it was very like Doranda. Can't say I liked it, but I can say it was very real and very well written.
Re: Trust Me (John/Rodney, sex continuing after safe word used but not heard) (Part 3)
anonymous
September 15 2010, 01:41:04 UTC
This is disturbingly believable--John diffidently giving in because he wants to give Rodney what Rodney wants (and too disturbed by it to give it much thought, including thinking about safe words while gagged?) and Rodney thoughtlessly pursuing what he wants and missing John's signals, not because he doesn't care, but because Rodney's never been adept at reading other people in any situation.
Rodney convinces John to try bondage only to get so into it he fails to notice John's trying to use his safe word and can't because Rodney gagged him. Prefer John's POV, if possible.
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That ability he has to steam-roll over John's objections could so easily backfire, just the way it did on Doranda.
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Thank you, thank you, this is so great!
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Oh, ouch. This was really, really great, Anon! And while I do love the quick punch it packs now, if you ever wanted to expand this more, I'd love to read it...
Thanks!
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Yes, that's what I would expect. Wonderful characterization.
Ow.
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That hurts and is horrible and so well done. Oh, hell.
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