Fic: "The War No One Spoke Of" (Challenge 1)

[jade_1459]

Hi, first time poster to this community. I stummbled upon it while looking for new places to find inspiration for writing SGA stories. It seemed a little ironic to me that I would come across a community that particular word in it's name and so I came and took a look and I'm hooked.

Here is the response I have for the first challenge issued in this

Comments

[kaaatie]

I'm glad you came across the community and were inspired by it!

That was a very nice story. It was very sad, but I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing! :)

[vagablonde]

This is absolutely fabulous - you told a lot in the short number of words you used. I thouroughly enjoyed this!

[starrylizard]

Cool! A little confusing, but cool!

One little thing: "he was going to through himself off the edge..." should be throw. The stuff the spell checker never sees. *grins*