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sgafan33

One Last Idea

Dec 26, 2005 04:04

I thought I should put something in this journal, I've had it for a while. I'm not a really a writer, but this is a good place to archive the few stories I have. This story was posted at FanFiction on Jan 31, 2005 ( Read more... )

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Re: I said I would give feedback so here it is. sgafan33 May 6 2006, 17:32:55 UTC

You thought it was long? I thought it was too short. And it was beta'ed. I may have rambled with too much detail, I have a problem with that. But as a first fic, I have a lot to learn. I actually hate writing and have never written anything before. But I struggled with putting this down because it was stuck in my head and wouldn't leave.

Thanks for your comments.

leesa_perrie October 19 2009, 11:09:12 UTC

Nice work! I've added a link for this to my episode-related list here!

One Last Idea on lessa_perrie list sgafan33 October 20 2009, 09:13:56 UTC

Thanks for reading my story and putting it on your list!

I guessed wrong at the time and made Rodney's sister older instead of younger like she turned out to be. And I made up some backstory that turned out to be totally wrong. But you can substitute the real backstory of Jeannie and the bulk of the story still works, so I don't feel too bad about it. It's about Rodney's feelings about the situation that's the important part of the story.

Thanks again for including this story on your list.