RESCUE BY wildcat88 [LFWS #1 ROUND 1]
Title: Rescue
Author: wildcat88
Rating: PG
Disclaimer:Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers:None
Prompt for the Round: > Write a story featuring the team in which ONLY dialogue is used. No scene setters at all. Just pure dialogue. Not even ‘... Sheppard said’ or ‘... Rodney complained’. All must speak at least once.
RESCUE by TO BE REVEALED
"Sheppard! Oh, God… Ronon, Teyla, I found him!"
"What is his condition, Rodney?"
"He’s unconscious, barely breathing. Pulse is sluggish. He has frostbite on his nose and ears, and he’s so pale he’s almost see-through."
"At least he is still alive. Where are you?"
"Oh, um, one of the side caverns on the left. Wait, I have… Ah, got it. I tossed a glow stick into the main chamber."
"We are on our way."
"Cavalry’s coming, Sheppard, so hang on. Sorry it took so long. Damn interference. God, you’re like ice! What happened to your parka? Oh, of course. You ditched it when you went under. I had no idea we were walking on a river. I would have never… When the ice broke, we tried- but we couldn’t-"
"Not…your…fault."
"Sheppard? You bastard. I thought you were- You- You’re a lot heavier than you look, you know."
"Don’t normally…snuggle on…the first…date."
"Don’t flatter yourself. I’m trying to keep you alive until Ronon can haul your ass out of here."
"You need…to put your coat…back on."
"You need it more. I’m not the one with hypothermia."
"I have…hypothermia?"
"Hmmm… Let’s see. You’ve been lying for hours on the floor of a cave after falling into an icy river during a snowstorm. What are the odds?"
"Oh."
"How did you get in here anyway?"
"Don’t remember. Where…are we?"
"M3Y-758. Trade negotiations."
"Sounds boring."
"It is. Well, it was until you fell in. Hey, no sleeping."
"Tired."
"I know you are, but you can’t sleep right now."
"Just…for…a min…"
"Wake up! Sheppard! Please don’t do this. Sheppard!"
"Not so…loud. Can’t sleep with…you screeching…like that."
"There’s no sleeping allowed. Come on. Get up."
"Can’t."
"Sure you can. We’ll meet up with Ronon and Teyla and go home."
"They okay?"
"Yes, yes. Everyone’s fine but you. Now, let’s go."
"Can’t."
"Well, why not?"
"Leg’s broken."
"Why didn’t you say something? Let me see. Oh, that’s just gross. Tell me you didn’t try to set it yourself."
"I’m not crazy."
"That’s a matter of opinion."
"Geek."
"Jarhead."
"I’m Air Force."
"You all look the same to me. Did you hear something?"
"McKay!"
"Ronon? Thank God. In here!"
"Hey guys."
"John, it is good to see you."
"You okay, Sheppard?"
"I am now."
"Watch his left leg. Compound fracture."
"Do you wish for pain medication before we move you?"
"No. Can’t feel anything."
"Dammit, Sheppard. What else did you forget to mention?"
"Nothing. Been lying on ice, remember?"
"This is still going to hurt. Help him sit up. Now, Sheppard, put your arm around my shoulders. Teyla, gently pick up his leg. McKay, brace his right side. Stand on three. One…two…three!"
"Ow, ow, ow! Sheppard, you’re breaking my arm!"
"Breathe, John. Breathe through it."
"Okay. I’m… okay."
"McKay, get to the jumper. Teyla, make sure the path is clear. Ready, Sheppard?"
"Yeah. Let’s…go…home."
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Author: wildcat88
Rating: PG
Disclaimer:Stargate belongs to Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer Studios Inc., no infringements of any rights is intended.
Spoilers:None
Prompt for the Round: > Write a story featuring the team in which ONLY dialogue is used. No scene setters at all. Just pure dialogue. Not even ‘... Sheppard said’ or ‘... Rodney complained’. All must speak at least once.
RESCUE by TO BE REVEALED
"Sheppard! Oh, God… Ronon, Teyla, I found him!"
"What is his condition, Rodney?"
"He’s unconscious, barely breathing. Pulse is sluggish. He has frostbite on his nose and ears, and he’s so pale he’s almost see-through."
"At least he is still alive. Where are you?"
"Oh, um, one of the side caverns on the left. Wait, I have… Ah, got it. I tossed a glow stick into the main chamber."
"We are on our way."
"Cavalry’s coming, Sheppard, so hang on. Sorry it took so long. Damn interference. God, you’re like ice! What happened to your parka? Oh, of course. You ditched it when you went under. I had no idea we were walking on a river. I would have never… When the ice broke, we tried- but we couldn’t-"
"Not…your…fault."
"Sheppard? You bastard. I thought you were- You- You’re a lot heavier than you look, you know."
"Don’t normally…snuggle on…the first…date."
"Don’t flatter yourself. I’m trying to keep you alive until Ronon can haul your ass out of here."
"You need…to put your coat…back on."
"You need it more. I’m not the one with hypothermia."
"I have…hypothermia?"
"Hmmm… Let’s see. You’ve been lying for hours on the floor of a cave after falling into an icy river during a snowstorm. What are the odds?"
"Oh."
"How did you get in here anyway?"
"Don’t remember. Where…are we?"
"M3Y-758. Trade negotiations."
"Sounds boring."
"It is. Well, it was until you fell in. Hey, no sleeping."
"Tired."
"I know you are, but you can’t sleep right now."
"Just…for…a min…"
"Wake up! Sheppard! Please don’t do this. Sheppard!"
"Not so…loud. Can’t sleep with…you screeching…like that."
"There’s no sleeping allowed. Come on. Get up."
"Can’t."
"Sure you can. We’ll meet up with Ronon and Teyla and go home."
"They okay?"
"Yes, yes. Everyone’s fine but you. Now, let’s go."
"Can’t."
"Well, why not?"
"Leg’s broken."
"Why didn’t you say something? Let me see. Oh, that’s just gross. Tell me you didn’t try to set it yourself."
"I’m not crazy."
"That’s a matter of opinion."
"Geek."
"Jarhead."
"I’m Air Force."
"You all look the same to me. Did you hear something?"
"McKay!"
"Ronon? Thank God. In here!"
"Hey guys."
"John, it is good to see you."
"You okay, Sheppard?"
"I am now."
"Watch his left leg. Compound fracture."
"Do you wish for pain medication before we move you?"
"No. Can’t feel anything."
"Dammit, Sheppard. What else did you forget to mention?"
"Nothing. Been lying on ice, remember?"
"This is still going to hurt. Help him sit up. Now, Sheppard, put your arm around my shoulders. Teyla, gently pick up his leg. McKay, brace his right side. Stand on three. One…two…three!"
"Ow, ow, ow! Sheppard, you’re breaking my arm!"
"Breathe, John. Breathe through it."
"Okay. I’m… okay."
"McKay, get to the jumper. Teyla, make sure the path is clear. Ready, Sheppard?"
"Yeah. Let’s…go…home."
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