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[sgr11]

Fic:   Untitled / possibly "Days of Lost"
Beta:  None (but needed!)
Pairing:  Cameron/House, Cameron/Chase
Rating:  R
Spoilers: S3 through S4
Summary:  Allison hides a relationship she had with House.
Disclaimer:  I don't own any of them.

Note:

I haven't written in so long... I jotted this out... and I'm happy that I finally wrote something.  THAT feels

Comments

[treacle_a]

Awwwwww.

:(

That was lovely. And kind of ...loaded. The whole thing's frustrated and angry and the style fits very well; the past tense even for current events, the POV very firmly second person. It reminds me of happier times, when we were both writing a lot and enjoying our OTP.

::happy nostalgic sigh::

[sgr11]

That was lovely.
Thank you.

And kind of ...loaded.
Yup

The whole thing's frustrated and angry and the style fits very well; the past tense even for current events, the POV very firmly second person.
I was hoping so... I wanted it to be -- seem/feel -- angry.

It reminds me of happier times, when we were both writing a lot and enjoying our OTP.How true! I find I'm having a hard time writing them - or even wanting to write them. The way (I guess) that canon has developed, it hasn't left a lot there... nothing really fun or flirty or suggestive... you know? Besides, I wanted to "see" Cameron angry... of sorts

[starhawk2005]

Later, during the thunderstorms, he used his soft tongue on her clit spelling out words - the feeling overwhelming her and never allowing her to figure out what he was telling her with those letters - she wish she knew.

Mmmm.

And I'm glad she walked away from House at the end. Go, Cam! That's all he deserves from her, honestly...

[sgr11]

And I'm glad she walked away from House at the end. Go, Cam! That's all he deserves from her, honestly...
Yup!

Thanks so much for reading!

[ww_sb_xf]

I feel sad :( And resignated, like it can't be fixed this distance between them (but i want it to!).

And the sadness it's what i feel after i watch House now (when i watch House). Even though i like the new characters (a surprise for me) :(

I liked it!!! (it's just the sadness, the angst!!! i shall look for fluff right now!)

[sgr11]

I feel sad :( And resignated, like it can't be fixed this distance between them (but i want it to!).
Sorry... :( The show has left me feeling this way about them. :( And it can't be fixed in this story! lol

And the sadness it's what i feel after i watch House now (when i watch House).
Yes, I couldn't agree more!

Even though i like the new characters (a surprise for me) :(
Hmmm... interesting... I have nothing against them... but I'm just not invested in them at all...

I liked it!!! (it's just the sadness, the angst!!! i shall look for fluff right now!)
Thank you so much!
I hope you had luck with fluff!

[ww_sb_xf]

At first i thought i would hate the newbies, but i found them nice (except Taub, and Amber trying to be part of the team, i liked her with Wilson). You could write about Kutner and 13 ;D (sorry, i ship them :P)

:)

I have many fics for that requirement, but then i remembered that i have this enormous project to write, so my mind was somewhere else ;)

[ladybugkoozl]

I liked what was going on here as it was packed with lots of stuff and emotion. I liked the comparison between her House & Chase relationships. It did make me a bit sad that she is merely 'okay' about being with Chase because I imagine he treats her rather well. Probably much better than those fleeting moments House gave her.

I think you can trim it down with some edits because in parts it is a bit repetitive, but you won't have to worry about losing that emotional punch as you have a lot of description throughout.

[sgr11]

I liked what was going on here as it was packed with lots of stuff and emotion.
Thank you.

I liked the comparison between her House & Chase relationships. It did make me a bit sad that she is merely 'okay' about being with Chase because I imagine he treats her rather well. Probably much better than those fleeting moments House gave her.
This is all very true... and fleeting is probably a very good word to use. It was meant to be sad though... :( There needed to be a certain sense of dissatisfaction with everything - her life, her "relationships" with Chase and House...

I think you can trim it down with some edits because in parts it is a bit repetitive, but you won't have to worry about losing that emotional punch as you have a lot of description throughout.Thanks for the advice... yes, there was some repetition - some of it on purpose... like something that is hounding her, you know? This piece was just a 'starter' piece for me, so I'm really not interested in editing it, though it would probably be good practice. I haven't

[katej]

you're one of my favorite authors so i'm glad to see you write something again!

this was so... tragically beautiful. you really feel for cameron... to see what he's done to her with his neglect. she's trying to act as though it doesn't matter when really it's all-consuming. that's how i see her on the show now... like she's trying so hard to truly get him out of her system. and to some extent i think she has, but i think it's a struggle for her to force herself not to care about him. i don't know. i just don't see how she could be in love with house the way she was and so easily and suddenly 'realize' that chase is the one for her. it just doesn't make sense to me.

anyway, great job!

[sgr11]

you're one of my favorite authors so i'm glad to see you write something again!
Thank you so much! And I'm trying... it's been a long time and I'm rusty!

this was so... tragically beautiful. you really feel for cameron...
Thanks... I wanted it to seem how difficult it might be on her -- should the scenario I presented ever really come into canon...lol

o see what he's done to her with his neglect. she's trying to act as though it doesn't matter when really it's all-consuming. that's how i see her on the show now...
Me too! It's sad... and I believe that she is probably more consumed with it then she presents.

like she's trying so hard to truly get him out of her system. and to some extent i think she has, but i think it's a struggle for her to force herself not to care about him.
I absolutely, totally agree with you!! I think she still insinuates herself and involves herself when she doesn't need to! Like when she did all those charts!

i don't know. i just don't see how she could be in love with house the way she was and