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May 22, 2007 16:07

cleaning cars
when the religious couple
aprroche, so earnest
i cannot turn them away
so with rag and polish in hand
i listen and wipe
as they spin me the song and dance
taking their card
and tucking into my shallow pocket
superstion, i will not throw it out
but i will allow it to
become lost

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maniainexcess May 23 2007, 14:30:15 UTC
I like this a lot
it's so real, so honest
I feel as if I'm watching it all happen

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sgriobhaiche May 23 2007, 16:06:21 UTC
thank you
it was a profound moment of
honest life

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