The speechspaminacan85October 24 2004, 15:19:34 UTC
It was alright, even though it was completely opposite mine(which of course, therefore means it is wrong)
To be honest, the problem with any of these speeches, and both mine and yours expecially, is that when you argue against something you give the negatives about it, don't talk about the positives, and really don't talk about whether it is needed or not.
Re: The speechsgtscruffyOctober 24 2004, 15:35:08 UTC
True, but that is true with all arguments; you want people to believe your point of view, so you focus on the good points of yours and the bad points of others.
As we all know, America failed in their mission, and the world did not fall to communism as a result of the domino theory The only thing I think you should change is that "as a result of" should be changed to "as it would have according to the Domino Theory."
I didn't read the speech. I'd rather hear it tomorrow and then refer to this to see how badly you fuck up...and I hope you SUCK at it...fucking up that is. Good luck, I'll see you tomorrow.
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To be honest, the problem with any of these speeches, and both mine and yours expecially, is that when you argue against something you give the negatives about it, don't talk about the positives, and really don't talk about whether it is needed or not.
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The only thing I think you should change is that "as a result of" should be changed to "as it would have according to the Domino Theory."
Good speech, Nick.
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Keep on pwning Alec.
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