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sha01001

The note Part 3

Oct 20, 2008 11:43

Title: The note part 3
Pairing: AsamixAkihito
Rating:NC-17
warnings: Slight bondage and evil use of a wodden spoon
A/M: Sorry this took so long but I started college and that took up a load of my time. Then I had computer problems so I was not able to update. Anyhoo I got myself a Beta and I want to thank Duchessofwonders for doing it.

( Asami stepped into the penthouse looking around for his pet )

Comments 4

sizukia October 19 2008, 14:15:01 UTC

Oh you are so prevent Asami but you told Aki-chan that you love him so lovely.
Next chapter please

mssupafan October 19 2008, 17:43:36 UTC

VERY nice smex!!! mmmmm...two vibrators? one made to resemble Asami? I'd buy one (maybe two? haha) in a heartbeat!

Great Job!!

gen50 October 21 2008, 14:19:30 UTC

thank you for the link back to your lj.

you have some typo errors but these did not detract from your story at all.

i thought your smexy scenes were smexy indeed, you write those scenes well

sha01001 October 21 2008, 14:33:43 UTC

Thanks for the first two I had no beta and for the third any mistakes must have been the ones i missed after my friend proof read it