I really like this, although I can't put my finger on why, exactly. Lovely writing, dead-on characterization (I especially liked Remus!), but there's something more. Hm.
This was just lovely! I loved the way it flowed, the characters in their settings - I could see it all perfectly in my head - and how their friendship and bantering dialogue felt so real and effortless.
Beautiful and atmospheric, with the rain and the fog and the street lights; I could picture it all so easily. That last paragraph though, that's what makes it - lovely and simple, but achingly sad considering what happens to them not so long after this. Great fic. :)
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Anyway, wonderful work! I enjoyed it a lot. :)
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I really enjoyed this! :)
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