Comments | shackinup_sesa: One Fine Night by <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/kabeyk">kabeyk</a></strong>

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One Fine Night by kabeyk

Dec 25, 2005 02:02

Title: One Fine Night
Author: kabeyk
Summary: Sirius wants a relaxing night, but with Remus (and Remus' book) he gets a lot more than he bargained for.
Rating: R
Recipient: xylodemon
Notes: I thought I might as well include everything that was asked for. I heartily thank my betas.

( for lj user=xylodemon )

mwpp-era, for xylodemon, su_sesa 2005, by kabeyk, fic

Comments 43

wildestranger December 30 2005, 17:19:40 UTC

I love this. So much good stuff, the dialogue is brilliant and I was laughing my head off as I was reading.

"Yeah," Sirius agrees with a bit of a sneer. "It's pro'lly a werewolf thing, all your bits fusing back differently." He allows a very brief pause before continuing: "Would explain that massive cock growing out of your forehead."

I've been remembering that phrase and snickering to myself. Brilliant.

I also love the fact that Remus is kind of cruel, not only as teenage boys are but also because for once he has something over Sirius. And the whole getting back at him and starting to fancy him is wonderfully written, I was smiling with glee all the time. Such marvellous bickering.

And the bit with the toes was great. Love this a lot.

kabeyk January 3 2006, 16:38:30 UTC

Heh, you're so sweet, you. Dickhead. :P

Sometimes I write Remus a bit pathetic, and sometimes I like him rather nasty. And seeing that the entire premise of the fic was childish bickering, it had to be that.

Toooooeeees.

kxx

amberlynne December 30 2005, 17:24:54 UTC

Oh you are twisted and evil! So sharp and uncomfortable, I was on the edge of my seat thinking it was jut going to end badly! But it was completely worth it because, whoa, hot. Nnnngh. I love it when Remus is sneaky and Sirius can't find a clue without his help. And it's brilliant because Sirius lusts after James but he wants Remus and yes. Very nicely done. :)

kabeyk January 3 2006, 16:46:00 UTC

Hee. Oh, I wouldn't write a bad ending for an exchange fic (or ever) and especially not when the request was for it to end with... that 'f' word I don't like...

Thank you.x

kxx

amberlynne January 3 2006, 16:49:26 UTC

Heh. You are welcome. And I just have to say, I adore that icon. I tried to find some humbugs but apparently Texas doesn't cotton to that sort of candy. Woe is I!

kabeyk January 3 2006, 21:35:40 UTC

Heh, I call those ones Everton mints, so probably you have to be a lot nearer Everton than Texas.

Damn, you reminded me that I'll have to change icons soon.

kxx

callmesandy December 31 2005, 02:29:27 UTC

Oh, neat. NEAT. I love the edge to Remus here, that near evil like it would end horribly.

kabeyk January 3 2006, 21:38:07 UTC

that near evil like it would end horribly

I really like the way you phrased that.x

Heh, thank you.

kxx

minnow_53 January 1 2006, 15:11:39 UTC

I didn't guess! :D The hints of Sirius/James are particularly intriguing... And the sex is great, as always!

^_^xx

kabeyk January 1 2006, 22:09:12 UTC

I know! *is pleased*

Have to get the S/J in there somewhere.

kxx

absinthe_lust January 1 2006, 15:55:08 UTC

Ohh, you write dark!Remus so delicously well. Of course, the hints of Sirius/James made my heart flutter. Wonderful.

kabeyk January 5 2006, 11:56:17 UTC

Sirius/James! I'm so in the wrong sesa, heh.

Thank you.

kxx