As mentioned, I got my hair cut yesterday. Would anyone like to take a guess as to how long this event took to occur? 10 minutes? Perhaps 15? Both of those guesses are incorrect. The correct one is 35 minutes
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I've always said it like smur-zinp. I like how smiznurp sounds, but it would need the letters of the acronym switched around, and from a story standpoint, that doesn't work.
1. The text size needs to be larger as I had to squint to read the dialogue. 2. You should have the action only take place on one skyscraper. The way the comic is presented with the twin buildings aflame it evokes images of the attack of the World Trade Center. 3. Other than the first two points I thought it was a very funny professionally done story. Congratulations for having the courage to undertake such a massive professional effort. I look forward to reading the whole comic.
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There's a 5-page preview on our blog, http://smrznp.blogspot.com.
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2. You should have the action only take place on one skyscraper. The way the comic is presented with the twin buildings aflame it evokes images of the attack of the World Trade Center.
3. Other than the first two points I thought it was a very funny professionally done story. Congratulations for having the courage to undertake such a massive professional effort. I look forward to reading the whole comic.
Lester
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