Fic: Fire: NC17

[shadowakiyah]

Title: Fire
Fandom: The Fast and the Furious
Pairing: Brian/Dom
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Mutual Masturbation
Words: 1035
Disclaimer: Suffice to say, they are not mine. No money, no malice, and I return them unharmed when I’m done.
Summary: It was the little things about Brian that got to Dom.
Notes: For prompt #27 Fire over at story_lottery. My iccle table is

Comments

[shadowakiyah]

Thank you. I'm glad it still had hotness! Glad you liked it.

[desariwalker]

God, this is hot! Thank you so much for giving such lovely visuals (especially since I'm supposed to be working) mmm, purrrs.

[shadowakiyah]

This piece was all about the visuals! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting :)

[nightrider101]

Holy hell!

This ranks right up as one of the hottest things I've ever read. It was more than porn. It read like poetry!

And somewhere, between ember-like stares and shuddery breaths, Dom could’ve sworn that Brian was glowing.

Yes, that bit right there. :)

Great job!

[shadowakiyah]

That line, believe it or not, was one of the first ones I wrote, and the only one I couldn't bear to take out - I just had to get it in there somewhere. I had so much difficulty getting this piece together, and I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks so much for commenting.

[kadymae]

I like your use of details and the slow build to the action. Well done!

[shadowakiyah]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

[anonymous]

Hot, yeah! Whooo *fans self*. Dom's got no chance against the sexiness that is Brian. No-one would.

I pick nits: I think you mean "vise-like grip" and "out-of-body experience".

-- Empress (no LJ acct.)

[shadowakiyah]

Thanks for taking the time to comment, I'm glad you liked it.

re: nitpicks: changed *smiles* thanks muchly..