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shadowakiyah

FIC: Talk: NC17

Oct 14, 2009 10:03

Title: Talk
Fandom: The Fast & The Furious
Pairing: Dom/Brian
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 2045
Written For: rounds_of_kink, prompt: Dom breaks into Brian’s place to talk, but when he finds Brian’s handcuffs, he has another idea. (post-first movie) from spikedluv But also fits in nicely for prompt #18 a full moon over at story_lottery (my iccle table is here) and prompt #96 writer's ( Read more... )

kink, slash, fanfic100, brian/dom, story lottery, the fast & the furious, dom/brian

Comments 12

sheeris_jemima October 14 2009, 10:09:07 UTC

I definitely shouldn't read this while sitting at an university PC, but this came at a perfect time (I was twitching for something to read other than what I have to work on *g*). And it was a GOOD read!

Thank you! :)

shadowakiyah October 14 2009, 15:55:33 UTC

I'm glad I could oblige! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I'm glad you liked it :)

kimmi_kiss October 14 2009, 13:28:41 UTC

ohhh...that was sooo good....your stories never disappoint though. Thanks so much.

shadowakiyah October 14 2009, 15:56:29 UTC

Thank you so much :) I am really glad for your comments, and thanks so much for the lovely compliment.

desariwalker October 15 2009, 02:16:41 UTC

Oh, this is excellent. I just love your work. Thank you so much for sharing :)

shadowakiyah October 16 2009, 08:32:53 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment. I am glad that you enjoy my fics :)

nightrider101 October 15 2009, 15:10:41 UTC

Dom smiled, just a little too widely. “I came to talk.”

Brian smiled back. He could definitely get used to this sort of conversation.

Hee! Talk. Yeah, sure, Dom. ;)

Great job as always. Sex is difficult to write, at least for me, and you do an amazing job without having it overdone or cheesy. That's a talent!

I hope we see more from you soon.

shadowakiyah October 16 2009, 08:39:15 UTC

The only thing I tend to worry over when I'm writing a sex scene, is whether or not it sounds exactly like I've written sex before. I mean, c'mon, how many times can you do it without it getting repetitive? But it turns out ok in the end, regardless of if I repeat some situations/scenarios, and I always try to keep it as true to character as possible - and honestly I think that's key. As long as it feels like it's real to them (or how they would be if you know, it was true, which of course, it is in my dirty filthy brain:) then I think that's what matters most.

That you enjoy it and don't think I overdo it or make it cheesy is wonderful praise really, because it's one of the things I always fret over.

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment :)I'm glad you enjoyed it.

christinalp December 15 2009, 20:00:21 UTC

wow!
soooooo adding this to my mems!

shadowakiyah December 16 2009, 22:41:30 UTC

Oh thank you :) I'm very glad you enjoyed it!