poem for Owen, first draft

Dec 14, 2009 13:42

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saffyjames December 14 2009, 20:42:25 UTC
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wanda_june129 January 4 2010, 19:16:08 UTC
first, thank you for adding me as a friend. that was really sweet :)
second, this is a FANTASTIC poem! I mean it -- i love the imagery of "spaceships and snow" and I love how you illustrate your son's own world and language, because it's so true. There is a tender nostalgia in this poem, that is counter by the final stanza's more somber tone.

a wonderful read -- I'm off to read more!

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packing_plastic January 12 2010, 16:21:37 UTC
I really like this.

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shadowbaby4 January 12 2010, 17:57:25 UTC
Thanks!

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