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Brigit's Flame All Stars - Week 2 - Shaken by a low sound

Jan 16, 2011 19:08

The sun was setting over the Great Cathedral of Albria, its red-gold orb looking caught amongst the spires like a jewel on a crown. The sky was painted in shades of crimson and orange, bathing the crowd below in a ruddy light ( Read more... )

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pipisafoat January 17 2011, 02:27:51 UTC

*enjoys* :D

shadowdream January 17 2011, 05:18:20 UTC

Woot! I'm glad. :)

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shadowdream January 18 2011, 20:21:14 UTC

Thanks! :) Yeah, I tried to give the setup from Smudge's point of view (I wanted to share her being shocked at Phillip getting up there and TALKING, and part of the tie in to the prompt was that feeling she gets in the pit of her stomach that he's just making it worse.) but keep that part as brief as possible. We all know how good at brief I am. ;) I probably could have picked up right where I cut it, but like I said, part of that was tying it in with the prompt. It was a little stronger to me, than the worried monkeys.

Glad you liked it!