Because you people keep bugging me...

[shadowelemental]

So, since I've gotten nothing but positive response and engouragement from the people that read my previous story. I figure I'll finish it before encouragement turns into threats on my life! I love you people!! So okay, enough of my stalling, here goes

Comments

[tctopcat]

omg you did not make me read that whole story and it just ends in an eye examination. ummm, not sure what to say...hahahahahaha i found it very entertaining with a most definatly surprising ending! talk to you tomorrow!

[shadowelemental]

Hahah, I didn't make you read anything, that was your choice. As for the ending I had to choose between having myself torn limb from limb, ((bet you would LOVE to see me get dismembered)) or having some sort of partially humorous ending. I chose the latter. Sorry to disappoint.

[fayeboolaye]

hehehehehehe.. now, hun, What good would come out of anything if you died..??.. but yea.. i loved it!! just like the first part.. they are both really good, in my opinion.. im jealous..

[shadowelemental]

Jealous? Of that?! Why?? As for my death, my body would decompose creating food for the environment, and .0000000000000052 percent of the world's overall resources would be available to someone else in my absence, and a future parking lot would be safe from my crazed needs for mass arson, hehehe.

[firedroplett]

i liked the "veins spanning out from an arboreal heart" line. that's awesome.

meh, the ending wasn't as good as the other one to be honest, but other than that, it's still really good. i could feel the paranoia, the dampness, everything... very descriptive. as always, i love reading your stories. you're an awesome writer.

loss for words i guess... without you on aim, the boredom is killing my brain.

[shadowelemental]

I actually don't know how I came up with that line, I mean I knew what I wanted to say, I just didn't expect it to come out so well. Anyway, yeah I wasn't too pleased with my ending, I can do better than that, but I guess my creativity kinda died after the one good line. I'm glad you could "feel" it, that's exactly what I want people to do with my writing, you're never supposed to READ a story, you're supposed to...I don't know. Empathy, I'll put it that way. But thanks nonetheless and I'm sorry I wasn't on AIM, I had to set up my grandfathers new compie and get it working right.