[Bleach] Examples of False Perfection - Isshin/Urahara

[shadowgirl1605]

Title: Examples of False Perfection
Fandom: Bleach
Characters/Pairings: Isshin/Urahara
Notes: This is pretty much for

Comments

[liralen]

Awww... so sad...

Poor, young Kisuke, the whole tangled path to that place. All balled up with his own mistakes. Poor kid.

Very solid impact with how you put that together. Setting up a change for the better and then going with the one factor he can't calculate... towards the fall. The sequencing is quite nice.

[shadowgirl1605]

♥ Thanks

[annieroo2]

I really adore the way you write Kisuke and his inner dialog. Even in this different setting from your 100 themes it seems so believable and interesting.

It's so easy to see how a scientist such as Urahara could obsess over all kinds of aspects of his life even when it's not healthy or in his best interests.

I also love the way you have started to incorporate the newest chapters of the manga into your Urahara fics. =D

[shadowgirl1605]

;D Couldn't let the new info pass me by~! ♥

*is still so glad you like her Kisuke* =)

[mysocalledhell]

very nice ... almost good enough to make me forget I'm sick ... which is really good.

[shadowgirl1605]

yaaay!!!! (and feel better soon~! ♥)

[nikita_cheri111]

Poor poor Kisuke... He would be the obsessive type wouldn't he? I do so love reading your Kisuke 'cause he's so different than my own. Verah naice! =^.^=

[shadowgirl1605]

XD He woooould.

And I enjoy reading your Kisuke for just the same reason ♥ It's always fun to see other people's interpretation of a character. ^__^

[shiny_glor_chan]

Aww, poor Kisuke. He never gets a completely happy ending. Nice fic. Not what I asked for, but I still liked it! ^-^

[shadowgirl1605]

<3 (and I wanted to write that fic you suggested for a while now - where everything's out in the open, but I still can't get it to work right without sounding too ... cliched. =/ *is sorry* *will try again later*)

[shiny_glor_chan]

^-^;; Hehehe, it's okay. Heheh, I like cliches. >>;;