[Bleach] Propositions of the Unsavory Sort

[shadowgirl1605]

Title: Propositions of the Unsavory Sort
Fandom: Bleach
Characters/Pairings: Urahara, Mayuri, a little bit of Hiyori
Notes: Speed ficcing with

Comments

[nnoi]

Oh nice!!! I think you write Mayuri beautifully. You get his dark calculating mind very well. and I love what he thinks about Kisuke it is very very interesting and I love WELL DONE!!!

[shadowgirl1605]

XD LIIIIES.

[nnoi]

*gasps looking offended and sad* I no lie....*wibbles* i liked your story....your mean....*pouts lower lip trembling*....and you do write Mayuri beautifully....meanie! =P *is obviously over the top today and also obviously still avoiding her homework*

[shadowgirl1605]

*pokes* HEY, NO AVOIDING IT. XD But yeah, I'll be online IM-wise once I finish up this power-point presentation for Monday~

[annieroo2]

SO are you starting to doubt Kisuke's good guy status? Because it sounds like it. XD I have to admit the last chapter has really made me start to wonder....

This was really great and I loved seeing inside Mayuri's head. His thoughts on Kisuke were certainly revealing and very accurate to Hiyori's feelings.

And once again the final line WINS! -
"And all he has to do is get rid of one little nuisance, and everything would be his for the taking."

[shadowgirl1605]

LOL, when haven't I doubted his good guy status? Srsly, the guy will get what he wants, whatever he wants. And he'll do anything to obtain it. XD This chapter just proved Kisuke is still Kisuke to meeeee. Because before, with dorky Kisuke, I was not sure whether to love or hate. XD ♥ But now I'm back to unquestionably fangirling him~

B-But I'll admit, I was more distracted by Kaien appearance this chapter more so than anything. "That impertinent little -"

[annieroo2]

Oh dorky, clueless Kisuke was just his disguise. Like his hat and fan are now. And Mayuri has so seen through it all. And well yeah Kisuke's always been pretty gray. But this latest chapter has him looking closer to black than I ever considered before. It's very delicious though. XD

When I saw Kaien's comment about Byakuya being a little snot, I was hoping you'd feel a fic coming on. Because then I wouldn't have to beg. LOL!!!

[yawns_widely]

I love the complexity! And the wide use of vocabularly. It is very insightful, as always with depth. Once again you make a home in a characters head and settle down peaceably. Have you wallpapered yet?

*croak* this is all my tired mind will allow.