Comments | shadowkitten87: Please help me make this essay not suck!

shadowkitten87

Please help me make this essay not suck!

Oct 12, 2007 10:56

The question is, "What are your reasons for seeking a The New England Institute of Art Scholarship ( Read more... )

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havefaith1 October 12 2007, 18:17:33 UTC

But where is your sparkle, your vitality, your voice? If you get that in there they will have no choice but to give you money. Trust me on this, I've never written a cover letter than didn't get me at least an interview. Do you have time to call me tonight? I'm "Home Alone" and would be happy to give some re-work advice!

shadowkitten87 October 12 2007, 19:47:39 UTC

Hmmm...I can call you, but I need to fax it over to the school today. In a couple of hours, to be precise. That's what I get for procrastinating. Ah, well, thanks anyway.

havefaith1 October 12 2007, 20:50:03 UTC

OK, I'm leaving work now - 3:50 - I will call you in 45 minutes (or less) on your cell - please answer anything from 773 area code OK?

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havefaith1 October 13 2007, 01:36:13 UTC

Minor changes but much better! I can "hear" you now. And, as we know, YOU are someone worth listening to!