The Concubine's Son Chapter One

[shadowofmyday]

The Concubine’s Son- Chapter 1
Rating: PG-13
Length: Chaptered [1/10?]
Author: shadowofmyday
Beta: [info]jaceni
Pairing: JaeMin, slight HoSu (I’ve already had someone miss it...)
Summary: Han Jaejun was the youngest son of the Sultan. His kingdom was a war, but had been offered a treaty. As part of the treaty, the heir to the Sultan would have to marry

Comments

[shadowofmyday]

Spot for my loverly beta jaceni

[jaceni]

Tell me about it. >_< Something is definitely wrong with Lj. I couldn't fix anything after I posted and it won't let me edit because everything is just GONE after a certain point. :( Oh, bb, do you know that the link you posted in starcandy is to the prologue not the first chapter? And that you have prologue in the title too? Just letting you know. ^__^

And now to my comment:

OMG!! I can't believe you ended it there! It's awesome BB. I loved how you portrayed Min and what motivates him to try to find Jaejoong. I was shocked that he revealed that much information to a child he barely knew, though. You know, with gossip and stuff. But I'm glad the little kid said something about Jae's location. :D The beginning was hilarious though. It's funny how Jaejoong lasted longer not eating than actual bad hygiene. XD Really can't wait for the next chapter. So excited to know what happens next. :D

[shadowofmyday]

T_T FML. I edited that starcandy post a billion times!~~~~~ TT_TT And now it won't let me edit it anymore! I fail. *cries* Luckily the hug post works, though...

Changmin sort of just trusts people from small villages and whatnot because he grew up in one. So the familiarity kind of just made him speak. And Taemin is too cute to not trust!~ XDDD

Yeah, Jaejoong is a bit of a fail in that sense.

Thanks for commenting! I'll update as soon as I can, and you can be excited about getting to read it first~ (LOL, I always am when I beta~ xP) Thanks again for beta-ing!~

[jaceni]

Oh really? O_O Stupid Lj. No problem sweetie. And I definitely do enjoy reading it first. :D

[whatifgirl86]

Yay for an update:D

Good thing Taemin gave a lead to Changmin as to where Jaejoong went. Funny how he automatically assumed that Changmin meant lover when he said he was looking for his prince.

Glad that you updated and can't wait to see what happens next^_^

[shadowofmyday]

Yeah~ I figure some people call their lover 'princess', so why not prince? ^_~

Thanks for commenting!

[hhazellee]

“Your lover?” The voice asked.
this makes me giggling :D
i'm glad jaejoong run though..won't be glad if he really married that princess..better marry changmin, rite? rite?? lol
i like the progress! :)
come on min, go to east! :DD

[shadowofmyday]

Hehe... Yes, if he's marrying someone it should be Changmin. If he gets married

Soon he'll go east, but he needs to sleep~ xP

Thanks for commenting!

[youngsoongi]

Good bot TaeMinnie, for telling ChangMin where JJ went :)

can't wait to see what will happen next

[shadowofmyday]

Yeah!~ Thanks for commenting~

[sitty1232]

interesting. please continue. :)))

hmm, so they haven't met yet. at least luke personally or talk casually..?
i'm curious how this will progress ^^

[shadowofmyday]

They haven't spoken to each other, but Changmin knows who Jaejoong is and Jaejoong has seen Changmin around.

Thanks for commenting!