Jaded Clarity [2/2]

Jan 02, 2009 14:26

Title: Jaded Clarity
Author: shadowsofcherry
Pairing: ChiiTaro
Genre: Angst, Friendship, Romance
Rating: PG
Warnings: Overflowing angst
Summary: Chinen was able to convince himself that one person can affect his life greatly.
Disclaimer: ChiiTaro would be too cute for my own benefit.
Notes: Part 2 and the last part. There's more angst in this part than in the first one ( Read more... )

genre: angst is love, fanfiction: one-shot, genre: romance is different from fluff!, pairing: chiitaro

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anilee0510 January 2 2009, 08:03:34 UTC
FIRST?

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anilee0510 January 2 2009, 08:28:45 UTC
YAAAAAAAAAAY!!! AND I READ THE WHOLE THING TOO!!!!!! *happy dances*

fhskafdjewfioawjfioewjafopwje!!!!!!!!! Chinen taking of Ryutaro is LOVE!!!

Chinen grabbed the water bottle beside him and held it against the Ryutaro's dry mouth.
This just totally killed me...

The sounds from the past are clearer than the loud splashes of the rain.
And this just stabbed my heart.

AAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!! THE ANGST!!!!!! ♥♥♥

Chinen...breaking...is...just...so...awesome...I LOVE THIS!!! OH THE ANGST!!!!!

"I'm sorry I can't buy you ice cream right now to stop you from crying." Ryutaro said weakly. That didn't help Chinen one bit since the older boy cried harder.
HE STILL CARES ABOUT CHINEN EVEN THOUGH HE'S ABOUT TO DIE??? T______________________________T SO SWEET!!!

"The next time we meet, I'll definitely surpass your cuteness." fjkafjioahweifheaowpf!!! *dies ( ... )

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shadowsofcherry January 2 2009, 15:42:33 UTC
Whoa! Long comment! Weeeee! ♥

Yay! I'm happy you finished it too! *joins the happy dance*

Chinen is such a mom sweetie.

ANGST, FTW! xD

LoL, somehow while writing the part where Ryutaro mentioned the ice cream, I cried too. xP Yes, Ryutaro's too sweet.

Haha! I love your reactions! ♥♥♥

That little cow did play a major role. x]

YAY! You love me! xDDDD *glomps back*

I love reading your comments by the way. ;)

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anilee0510 January 4 2009, 01:14:35 UTC
Yes long comment. XP I tend to forget myself when it comes to Chiitaro.

XDDDDDD Chinen's too bratty to be a mom. XDD

ANGST IS LOVE!!!

LOL my reactions? Thank you! I think...? XDD

Pfft! The cow planned the entire plot!! <--wtf am I saying?

Um...people say my comments amuse them for some reason? @.@

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i_collect_cars January 2 2009, 08:07:38 UTC
dang. I'm second this time D=

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i_collect_cars January 2 2009, 08:13:00 UTC
*tears* So...so very angsty, but in a very very good way. Because I love angst. xD

When Ryu-chan's mom gave Chinen that toy civwrioberobnreruibohbwehvw.

Cute and sad and amazing.

"I'll definitely see you on the other side someday, Ryu-chan."

;_____;

♥♥♥

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shadowsofcherry January 2 2009, 15:44:55 UTC
I'm definitely loving angst too! Although I used to hate it before and stay on the fluffy side always. xD

The cow was a remnant of their love. ;)

Thank you! ♥

^^;

♥♥♥

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shadowsofcherry January 2 2009, 15:47:57 UTC
Awww...well sadness make up the angst. That's what sadness is for! xP

*gives tissues*

Chinen will be strong! And when they meet next time, their love is stronger. ;)

Thank you! ♥ Angst is love! ;)

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meimarino January 2 2009, 11:07:50 UTC
Dude... I'll just text you my comment Xp

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shadowsofcherry January 2 2009, 15:49:23 UTC
Pffffft...too lazy to type? Or you just hate me too much because I killed another member? xD

I know, I know. I'm working on your fics! x]

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meimarino January 2 2009, 16:23:51 UTC
Well you already read what I texted you Xp so I guess I don't need to reply on the first part now would I?

and yay! :D *happy dance*

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shadowsofcherry January 2 2009, 15:50:45 UTC
Yes, that's how I do angst.

Sadness is angst! And angst is love! xD

Thanks for reading! ♥

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