For Finn!mun

Apr 15, 2006 10:11

The Proposal ( Read more... )

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faramir_boromir April 15 2006, 00:52:55 UTC
*smooshes you so hard, ribs break*

This is perfect, especially the last 8 lines. I love it. *Finn stares, open-mouthed*

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shadowspin April 15 2006, 01:06:47 UTC
*grins*

Well, remember I said 'how the hell do I fit all that into 100 words?' The first one was about 40 and I had to keep going over it.. which was good as small things kept jumping up to be remembered about it all.

Damn, and even now another way of finishing it just popped into my head. Knew I should have waited before posting it!

*mutters and wonders whether to change it... *

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shadowspin April 15 2006, 01:24:22 UTC
There! Couldn't help it, had to change it. Tell me which you prefer.

*hums and waits patiently*

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faramir_boromir April 15 2006, 02:05:13 UTC
Like it even better now. *grins like an idiot*

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