Hidden Hope

[shadowwolf13]

Tiane’s legs pump furiously under her like pistons. The cold, dark forest closes around her like a dark presence. She can almost taste the malevolence in her gasping breaths. Her chest is tight, aching with strain as she struggles to draw in more air to feed her starving muscles

Comments

[anonymous]

This had me on the edge of my seat! Absolutely wonderful writing yet again.

[shadowwolf13]

Thank you!! :hugs:

[rayaso]

This was really great, and so creative! I love "oncewolves." The idea of hope at the center of the hellish forest was wonderful. The chase descriptions were vivid and the various perils imaginative. I enjoyed it very much.

[shadowwolf13]

I really hope the next prompt brings me back here. :laugh: I want to know more about this world.

I'm super glad I captured your imagination. :D Thank you!!

[eternal_ot]

I got sucked into the action from the first sentence and you held my attention throughout. A very creative take and I hope you go back to this world. I want to know Tiane's history and what happens next.

Very well written! Kudos.

[shadowwolf13]

Yay!! I'm glad i was able to capture that hook. I want to know more too! :laugh:

Thank you so much!

[tonithegreat]

What a cool concept! I feel for poor Tiane, but I feel like that hope will be a powerful tool for someone eventually. Nicely done!

[shadowwolf13]

I think so too! Built up hope has so much potential. :)

Thank you so much!

[bleodswean]

This is so dark. Very visual. I'm now wondering how this bloom offers hope.

[shadowwolf13]

I have a couple ideas of what it might be but I'm not 100% positive which direction the story will go just yet. :D