Title: Any Colour You Like
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Colourful Side of the Moon by
chaladaWord Count: Just over 4,000
Rating: R for swearing, implied sex and drug use.
Contains: *Drinking, swearing, drug use (duh), a little bit of angst, a little humor, and just a hint of crack. (Crack, however, is not the drug in question.)*
Summary: Sometimes memories are
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This was quite different and quite original. It is Oh So Very 70's (I had a memory of my favorite bell bottoms with the butterfly on the leg :D), quite authentic in a way beyond just the references to the music and the books, as is the art. It was a good match, I think, you and chalada. I liked very much that it was Remus who grounded Sirius. I like your descriptions, particularly of Remus' gifts. I love how you carry your vision of Remus' parents through your stories (which may be one reason I find your work comforting--there's a familiarity that runs through them all). In the end, I even liked that you begin and end with Sirius ( ... )
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And I'm glad it felt geniunely '70's. That's very much what I was going for, my dear. Also, bless you for noticing that Remus was meant to ground Sirius. That is very much what I saw in the art and I wanted to make that come alive.
Thanks, again!
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I won't quote every part I loved back to you, but just this:
Eight notes sounded in his skull, deeply synthesized and punctuated by the steady, tinny beat of the high-hat. “On the Run.” As if in time, a great, blue cloud of pulsing colour rose up and surrounded the two flying boys. Brilliant blues flashed by, turning to violet with sudden, brave abandon. Fire-strewn reds and oranges streaked through the now-darkening sky, and Sirius nearly forgot to breathe. Still, Remus held him closely, keeping him safe. Safe. Warm. Loved. Even the violent spears of screaming alarm clocks in “Time” failed to bring him down, for he was everything - and best of all, he was with Remus.The whole section where you describe ( ... )
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I have to admit that I love Pink Floyd and have probably listed to the album a million times.
And I'm glad you like Remus' family. They're actually some of my favorite people to write.
Thanks, again.
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I laughed for the first time in a long time at so many parts - your lovely portrayals of the Marauder comraderie (lol, say that 3 times fast!). I loved the rhymes with the comb! And OH MAN, "El esdee" if I read that with a Spanish accent, I can barely contain the laughter, it's so ridiculous, and so them hahahaha.
And how Sirius knows Remus so well, and how well you let us know that Remus loves him back. And lastly, the way you described Sirius fear and doubt right before. I felt it too, and then swoop in with Remus reassuring him, aaaaawwwwwwwww.
I loved this. Xxxxx
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I have a weakness for magical objects talking. (Wait 'till you real my Small Gifts fic.) Siriusly, though, they're fun to write. Hell, Marauders are fun to write.
Thanks, again!
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And, yeah, I was thrilled when I say what art I'd gotten.
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Fantastic job <3
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