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Fic: Procrastination by Sopdetly

Nov 23, 2011 14:08

Title: Procrastination
Username: sopdetly
Art: " Chaos Theory" by cackling_madly
Word Count: ~2,900
Rating: NC-17
Contains: *sexytimes, boys being stupid boys, top!Remus, unintentional exhibitionism, visible!Wormtail*
Summary: There's always something better to do than revising. Especially with Prongs and Wormtail out of the room.
Notes/comments: I'm so glad I got the ( Read more... )

author: sopdetly, art: chaos theory, fic: procrastination, artist: cackling_madly, fic

Comments 20

miss_amberly November 23 2011, 16:09:23 UTC

I have such a soft spot for wrestling for dominance, and this piece did a fantastic job with that ♥. I also very much enjoyed James' "whatever" reaction to what was going on.

sopdetly November 25 2011, 15:21:52 UTC

Thanks so much! I think James is just glad he hasn't walked in on this scene too often. ;)

brighty18 November 23 2011, 17:33:14 UTC

You really had me at the first line: Remus stared ahead blankly, not seeing the pile of work that had built up in front of him. NEWTs. NEWTs could just go fuck off as far as he was concerned. Right then and there I know that this was going to be, above all, fun. This was an awesome piece of art. When I first saw it, I saw fun and wrestling, but it also occurred to me that it could have gone on toward angst, rough, sex, and genuine fighting. I’m glad you went for fun, though. You write it well and this was terribly enjoyable.

Humor! I love it and you write it exceedingly well. One of the greatest things about the MWPP period is the chance to be funny and you really got that. This bit really made me laugh: Remus rolled his eyes and wiggled his shoulders, trying to release himself from Sirius's grip. "You'd think you would have learned, too, that I'd be far more amenable to distraction if you didn't constantly suggest that I'm a librasexual ( ... )

sopdetly November 25 2011, 15:29:34 UTC

Isn't the art great? Such clear action in it, which makes it easy to find its story! I'm glad you found the boys so boyish, as that can often be intimidating for me. So thank you very much (again!) for the really great feedback. :)

escribo November 23 2011, 23:06:53 UTC

This was lovely and funny and hot :D I liked your Remus, especially at the beginning, and James reaction. Nice!

sopdetly November 25 2011, 15:32:30 UTC

Thanks so much, especially for saying you found it hot! I don't write smut often, so I'm really glad it worked for you!

protegonox November 24 2011, 05:05:46 UTC

So very lovely, and so very hot! Loved the mix of humour and tenderness at play here, and how Sirius keeps the details of their relationship from James; I like knowing Sirius isn't dependent on James sometimes. :)

sopdetly November 25 2011, 15:34:09 UTC

Thanks very much! I always figured that as close as James and Sirius were, as "never seen one without the other" they appeared, that they would go their separate ways when it comes to romance. ;)

dustmouth November 26 2011, 01:04:40 UTC

I really liked the start of this- Sirius' hands on Remus' shoulders, in fact all of the actions here came though really nicely.

You write their movements in such a way that I was able to follow every small victory in their fight easily, but without it being jarring or something that i wanted to skim through.
There was a lovely kind of closeness about it, to hands and legs and limbs all getting tangled together. I think that kind of feeling catches the artwork perfectly.

I loved them fighting to see who could top. The way that Sirius found the terms "acceptable". It was all so business like in the most ridiculous of ways :)

sopdetly November 26 2011, 15:12:03 UTC

Cheers for that! Tracking the movements was the hardest part for me, so thank you very much for complimenting how they turned out! :D