Comments | shah_of_blah: BSG Ficlet: As the Driven Snow

shah_of_blah

BSG Ficlet: As the Driven Snow

Feb 26, 2011 19:11

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latteaddict February 27 2011, 09:43:09 UTC

Love the mood of this, it's like there's not quite enough air in the room.

shah_of_blah March 1 2011, 01:11:06 UTC

Thanks Latte! Mmm, I like that description. Not enough air in the room. I hadn't articulated it that way, but I imagine that's how Kara must have felt while she was imprisoned for all that time.

rose_griffes February 27 2011, 13:17:24 UTC

Oh, well done. Especially that moment where Leoben is walking back in the room--EEEEP!

shah_of_blah March 1 2011, 02:52:17 UTC

Thanks Rose!

rdave1 February 28 2011, 21:19:54 UTC

Lovely! I love the darkness of it and the creepiness when Leoben walks back in.

shah_of_blah March 1 2011, 02:52:54 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

daybreak777 February 28 2011, 23:40:54 UTC

That was great! Awesome last line.

shah_of_blah March 1 2011, 02:53:33 UTC

Thanks DB!