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[shahnida]

Title: The Light..?
Series: Kingdom Hearts/Chain of Memories
Characters: Marluxia
Rating: G
Status: Complete
Medium: ShiPainter - Oekaki
Description: Quick oekaki of Marluxia from Chain of Memories (Axel was supposed to be in this picture but it was 4 am and I fell asleep and forgot. *dies*) Just a profile shot as he's disappearing. I imagine a

Comments

[zhoutaisdayoff]

I really love the coloring on the muse pic. =O

And the little Mitsuhide pic! XD

[shahnida]

Little!Mitsuhide loves you too. =3

[autophobia]

I'd say more... just not in the mood.

Really pretty artwork, as always. I liked the one with your muses. It led to interesting thoughts about how they are alike, physically and not. Oh, and your marker work is amazing. Keep it up.

[shahnida]

You'll be biased when you are in the mood, hush!

*giggles* dawww, thanks. Oriya, Vincent and Ranmaru actually are pretty similar to each other in their own way. It's kinda fun to think about. But hey, guess I relate better to them n'stuff!! :3

[sleepykelvina]

Wow, nice work with the Sharpies. Whenever I attempt marker, it looks like an explosion went off on my paper. >>;;

My only critique is of the top piece. You've got this very strong diagonal grain built into the image, with very strong horizontal/vertical boarder/linework on top of that. I would suggest getting rid of the pink lines altogether or comming up with some kind of graphics that works with the flow of the image. He's a very pretty boy, but the lines distract from his prettiness.

But very nice work overall. I kinda like the ink-only version of the three muses better. The ink work is very crisp and clean and it's just a very nice composition.

And I'm so loving your Vincent fetish. *tires to get him out of his robe* XD

Wewt, keep the pretty boys comming! (er...no pun intended. 8D)

I'm so prompt on this aren't I. *dies*

[shahnida]

I swear I was just screwing around with them. Sometimes the results are just scary!

*grin* yeah, after you pointed out how the lines are distracting, I looked at it again and sure enough, it makes sense. I only wish I hadn't completed the image with merged layers on oekaki, otherwise I'd have been able to correct it, but I'll keep that in mind for later images!

Keep the critique coming! I totally, totally appreciate it! *GLOMPS*

IneedtodrawmoreRufusbutmaintaininghisgorgeousnessishard... nopunintendedthereeither*dies*

Better late than never...I think...

[haritori]

Starting from the top... I need to play KH... Everyone's going on about it and I have no idea who these characters are!! Now, back to your art. I love the coloring as usual, but something about the hair disturbs me... I can't figure out what it is though... Will get back to you if I ever figure it out...

Vincent being shy and seductive is love!! *dies* Vincent will do anything for Rufus... *coughs* Especially love the sketch in the upper right hand corner since I have lost all talent in drawing people facing forward... -_-;;

I have no idea who Mori Ranmaru is but the sketches are so pretty!! *paws* I have a soft spot for the chibi!Ranmaru though... It's so cute!!

Vincent...is...a woman... *dies* Your AU ideas are awesome... Vincent is Rufus's pleasure slave... *grins* The wink and the little hearts kill!! I <3 the shading in this one