Reunion 1/2

Sep 20, 2010 22:42



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rangerangelica September 21 2010, 07:00:43 UTC
FUUUUUUUUUUU
*ridiculous french accent* continue!
/end accent
i've been jeti deprived since school started again haha

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shakrin September 22 2010, 02:08:55 UTC
*begin french accent* ohohohohohohoho /end accent

DEPRIVED? JETI?! YOU AND ME BOTH MY FRIEND. that's why i kind of fulfilled my own urge.

and yes. you can take that last sentence the wrong way. but you wouldn't cuz you're not a pervert.

..or R u?!1!/1!?

:D thanks for reading, hope you stick around.

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timhyun September 21 2010, 09:19:18 UTC
oh my god, that was amazing. please do continue this :)

wow, I haven't read a good JeTi fic in a while.

in another note, French Yoong is intriguing.

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shakrin September 22 2010, 02:10:04 UTC
i will continue even if it's the last thing i do, i swear. :D

and on that note, french yoong is fucking sexy <3

thanks for reading, and stay tuned :)

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... Well Well Well snsdgo September 21 2010, 10:55:53 UTC
It's been awhile.

OH QUEEN OF HEAVENS FORGIVE ME FOR NOT RECOGNIZING YOUR WORK! THIS SERVANT DESERVES DEATH BY THOUSAND BLADES OVER AN OIL FLAME *Dramatic*

Okay okay, enough joking around

Welcome Back, Vampire Writer. I hope you still remember me! D:

The Story was deep, sophisticated, clever. I'm not really sure how to phrase it, been too out of practice in praising fanfics (School + Limited Fanfics)French Sexy but confusing :( . the relationship is deep without being complicated, making the piece accessible and most importantly, human.
(btw Jessica is such a reader lure! XD)
However I have a small feeling that you write one-shots more than continuous stories, because it felt.. too abrupt?

Anyways, Welcome Back, Vampire Writer. I hope you still remember me! D:

Please continue with your amazing story. this comm needs more fics like yours!.

SNSDGO
P.S: Anshi's still around, I'll make sure she gets this
P.P.S. Where have you been?

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Re: ... Well Well Well snsdgo September 21 2010, 10:57:41 UTC
Opps.. Failure of Copy Paste
Anyways, I loved your first work, hence your title :P

Hope you don't mind me commenting twice, they don't allow re-edits D:

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Re: ... Well Well Well shakrin September 22 2010, 02:15:03 UTC
i know, i'm trying to reel in more readers with the gorjess jessica ahahaha

and yes, your small feeling might be the right feeling because Reunion is gonna be a two-shot or a three-shot AT THE MOST. i'm not good with long stories, people get bored, i get hurt when people get bored, and then i get bored, and then i put a bunch of meaningless sex scenes in the story which in turn i delete two days later- IT'S HAPPENED, and let us hope it doesn't happen again.

and would you make sure that Anshi gets the news that I'm dedicating this to her? lol thanks you're a sweetheart.

ps. i've been away wondering why on earth we have earlobes. but i figured it out, so i'm bk. if you wanted to know what they were for- they're there to play with! :D

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Re: ... Well Well Well snsdgo September 22 2010, 02:22:32 UTC
Earlobes are to Play... With? *smirk* Tell me more ^^

lol.. MEANINGLESS SEX SCENES?! SHARE! NOW PLEASE. I WILL NEVER GET BORED WITH THOSE! (as you can tell, I am morally depraved XD)

Well I'll tell Anshi WHEN SHE STOPS GOING AWAY ON MSN lol..

and don't worry, we all improve with practice. so work on your long scenes!
(also now that you point it out.. the last line DOES sound wrong out of context!)
thanks for re-editing your typos/errors

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vtension September 21 2010, 12:27:25 UTC
I loved it! Your writing is so precise and full of imagery. I never thought that Yoona and Tiffany could be a pairing per say, but I like it. Jessica seems stalker-ish, in a cute way lol. Please update soon =)

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shakrin September 22 2010, 02:18:36 UTC
yoona and tiffany can make a hot couple if you really thought about it. just like how sooyoung and taeng would make a hot couple. :( but i ship the minor pairs so i would understand if you disagreed.

ohhh and there's something special about jessica, not a stalker at all! ...umm ok maybe a little bit but not a study naked women through binoculars sort of way.

lemme give you a hint.

she's one of the stars that fill the night sky.

thanks for reading :)

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hwang639 September 21 2010, 13:28:05 UTC
Me likey this.. however, yes, however as much as i like this classy sounded convo, the french part i killing me T^T i don't understand french..
psst >,> JeTi FTW! kekekeke~
can't wait to read the 2nd part =))

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museelo September 21 2010, 14:16:12 UTC
“Pas moi.”
"Not me."

“C’est ma faute.”
"This is my fault."

“Je suis desolée,” [...] “C’est ma faute.”
"I'm sorry," [...] "This is my fault."

“Au revoir, Tiffany.”
"Good bye, Tiffany."

“Je t’attendais.”
"I was waiting for you."

“Six heures.”
"Six hours."

I hope you understood better :)

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shakrin September 22 2010, 02:20:21 UTC
with people like you, who needs dictionaries??

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museelo September 22 2010, 19:46:50 UTC
Oh o.o
Erm, I don't know what to reply to that xDDD

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