FIC: << And Then To Drown >> [ naruto, kibashino ]
There so needs to be more kibashino!
And more smut...
*nods decisively*
Title: [And Then To Drown]
Pairing: Kiba/Shino (Naruto)
Category: R; rom, drama
Length: short (405 words)
Summary: Shino decides to take a shower. Kiba seconds the motion.
( Water, water everywhere; it gives me time to think )
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He thinks maybe Kiba can smell it on him, and knows he’ll never remember to ask. Because Kiba is kissing him now, deep and slow, and it’s getting more and more difficult to hold on to slippery things like thoughts."
love the touch of animal hinted at with the smelling and i like how Shino's loosing his calm kind of which is something i dont think he'd do except with someone hes' intimate with.
"It is always like this - Kiba takes and doesn’t stop to ask. But he never took anything he did not replace. And he would never want something Shino didn’t, in fact, wish to give."
i like this because it shows jst how well they know one another and that verbal comunication is not in fact needed
"Sane, but that’s not how he’s feeling when Kiba’s answering hardness presses into his hip, canines dragging gently along his collarbone…"
lovely mental image ::wiping drool away unsuccessfuly::
"Kiba growls possessively, and understands him just finelike this as well because ( ... )
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You're thoughts are exactly like mine while I was writing it, which is teh awesome...! ;)
Oh, and the last few words are from...me! They just floated into my head when I was done and I thought it was a nice way to end it...heh.
I'm so glad you liked it...
I was wondering if to mention this fic before, but figured I'd be spamming the poor comms with it soon enough...
I got one more kibashino fic left to post, btw!
And you should really write your hilarific ideas, too. Who cares if it's been years? No one else needs to know that and you made me laugh like a bitch.
Or maybe a hyena. 'Cause hyenas laugh really hard, man.
Really.
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cord-chan
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wh33, this should be fun...
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PS - I like the last line too. Ah, Kiba...*mrawr*
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