Technical difficulties. My laptop is dead. ;P Trying to keep up with plotty stuff which = hard.
ANYWAY! I LOOOOOOVE THIS! I really did. I adore all the extra people you used in it. (HAHAHAHA love for JP there, and Peter.) And as always I adore your writing style.
Thanks so much! I'll have to see what I can come up with to continue it on. Heee.... :)
My first version was the battle at Wundagore, which ended up only a paragraph here, and then it was just going to be the Mike and Toad and John bit, only I wanted a proper set-up, so I put Wanda in, but then Wanda basically took over the story until I gave up and scrapped all of that, and started with Peter, and then I put Wanda back in, only she took over again, so I chucked most of it away and did the intercutting thing with the rest, and then it seemed a really good idea to open every part with knocking which turned out to be ridiculously hard about 80% of the way in, and then I stared at it blankly for a week and then I posted it, and now you know the rest of the story. *gasps for breath*
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Technical difficulties. My laptop is dead. ;P Trying to keep up with plotty stuff which = hard.
ANYWAY! I LOOOOOOVE THIS! I really did. I adore all the extra people you used in it. (HAHAHAHA love for JP there, and Peter.) And as always I adore your writing style.
Thanks so much! I'll have to see what I can come up with to continue it on. Heee.... :)
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*fixes weird tenses and typos*
My first version was the battle at Wundagore, which ended up only a paragraph here, and then it was just going to be the Mike and Toad and John bit, only I wanted a proper set-up, so I put Wanda in, but then Wanda basically took over the story until I gave up and scrapped all of that, and started with Peter, and then I put Wanda back in, only she took over again, so I chucked most of it away and did the intercutting thing with the rest, and then it seemed a really good idea to open every part with knocking which turned out to be ridiculously hard about 80% of the way in, and then I stared at it blankly for a week and then I posted it, and now you know the rest of the story. *gasps for breath*
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