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shamelessbishi

My Feelings if any...

Aug 20, 2008 23:14

Like a moth to a flame, I do reside. My flights of fancy beneath the veil of drops unto land the roses. Across the raging asphalt rivers, I traverse - wandering the through the muck, the disillusioned, and vagabonds of this town. I seek the truth at the end of the well during most nights of the week. Longing reaching for my heart's desire. Like the ( Read more... )

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zanthraxis August 28 2008, 17:51:50 UTC

That's very beautiful :)

in other words anonymous August 29 2008, 14:56:49 UTC

BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH i'm depressed BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH LAWV ME WHERE'S MY LOVE *feeds you bottle* SUCK IT UP! HAHAHAHAH!! Yes it's vitamin enriched don't you know? Fortified with L.O.V.E ( ... )

Re: in other words anonymous August 30 2008, 00:53:30 UTC

who are you? at least you get me....crazy.... hmm... I'm thinking... but I don't remember someone this blunt... unless its only one person... but you don't sound like him...

care to fess name please...

Re: in other words anonymous August 31 2008, 17:56:42 UTC

i don't like rhyming i just say it like it is, this is your goddamn cow i gave you your milk don't pout or cry over it just take it like a man and come back to the pure, 'cause you made me dirty, i couldn't get clean until you showed me the way, and now i'm leading you back, so get the fuck over here.

anonymous September 5 2008, 07:51:11 UTC

Wow...the anonymous there is...just wow. That's some impressive BULLSHITTING and FUCKERY. I could laugh if it wasn't so poorly written. Dude, isn't this the kind of thing you'd list under fucking private? It is very poetic, and beats the fuck out of my own shitty ass poetry skills. Like the first commenter said, it's good, touching, and doesn't deserve to be shitted on like that.

anonymous September 5 2008, 17:24:42 UTC

June's more of a man than to be hurt by my shit.

shamelessbishi September 6 2008, 01:57:49 UTC

I may be more of a man not to be hurt by this. Usually I know who's talking about me. Second when friends talk smack about me they own up. Moving on this passive aggressive speaks more about your insecurities. I write to log my feelings and to get my creative edge off. The fact you have not identified yourself by any means of SN or name from RL means we weren't really friends to begin with.