Under Advisement [Chapter 4]

Mar 10, 2010 04:43

Title: Under Advisement (Chapter 4)
Pairing(s)/Characters: Friendship! JongKey, KhunYoung, Nichkhun/Minho, Onew, Jay/Key, Tiffany
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Crack, College AU, Romance
Summary: DATE NIGHT! Wooyoung and Nichkhun have their first date! And everything goes swimmingly, that is of course until the entire thing goes down the crapper. Jonghyun ( Read more... )

character: nichkhun, character: minho, fandom: 2pm, character: jay, khunyoung, character: jonghyun, under advisement, fandom: shinee, au, character: onew, character: wooyoung, character: key, crossover

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pcd_intraining March 10 2010, 12:55:48 UTC
you are god!! i love you so much right now!!
Key is the best and i would love him as a friend!!
jonghyun is adorable, same with Nickhun (but at times Nickhun's like a lost puppy, those ones where you just cant help but want to do something.)
i LOVE Jaebum, my favourite character so far, please let there be more of him!!
And Minho's kinda creeping me out!!
I love you, the story and everything in between!! <33
Sorry for being a silent reader!! XD

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shamelessfics March 11 2010, 02:01:59 UTC
OMG Thank you! I would love for Key to be my friend as well, I have a few clothes that need to be made fun of. LOL

I'm glad you like Jonghyun and Nichkhun I'm working on not making their characters stale, so thank you!

And yay for loving Jay! There will definitely be more of him.

I know Minho's kind of a creeper, but don't worry I'll be fleshing his character out very soon.

Your silence is more than forgiven. I adore your feedback but as long as you're reading it's fine with me.

Thanks so much!

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kumi13 March 10 2010, 14:28:00 UTC
LOVED IT.

there were some small grammatical errors along the way. watch out. :)

I LOVE YOU FOR UPDATING THIS FIC. I LOVE IT.

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shamelessfics March 11 2010, 02:04:08 UTC
YAY! I'm glad you liked it!

And thanks! Yeah I gave it a re-read and noticed my failure I'll try to be more careful next time but bear with me if you can, grammar's not exactly my strong-suit.

Thank you for reading and commenting and thanks so much for the concrit.

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kumi13 March 12 2010, 05:10:14 UTC
I don't mind it at all. I just want to help you improve cause your one hell of a writer. <3

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xxqod March 10 2010, 16:07:40 UTC
OMG. I'mma loving this <3
Relating almost everything to smut <3
hehe. Key just doesn't have his day.

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shamelessfics March 11 2010, 02:06:30 UTC
I'm so glad you're liking this! I hope you keep reading it!

And yeah a part of me had a lot of fun torturing Key. LOL

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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shamelessfics March 11 2010, 02:35:26 UTC
I know I know, I'm crazy. But it was so awful and I didn't want to lose my momentum. I walked around like a zombie all day today and I will be crashing hardcore in about 10 minutes.

Thank you so much for procrastinating just to write me a comment. If anyone knows about procrastination, it's me! (glares at yet-to-be-filed taxes).

ILU forever! (panting in anticipation of your next Courage update btw)

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shamelessfics March 12 2010, 19:46:48 UTC
Okay I realize that i didn't write a proper reply to your proper comment but you know I want to nuzzle up beside all your comments so, yeah thanks.

And as for Courage, whatever you do with it will be awesome. Your writing style is so effective that every chapter has made me scream in frustration at my computer. It's torture but I love every second of it! So just do what you do, and it'll be awesome.

/stan

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JONGKEY. imushiehead March 10 2010, 20:27:34 UTC
NUU D: WHAT HAPPEN TO JONGKEY T.T

MY DEAR JONGKEY!

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Re: JONGKEY. shamelessfics March 11 2010, 02:38:53 UTC
I know I know I'm sorry. I did put a friendship warning in the pairings for the JongKey shippers. Maybe I'll write them a oneshot or something but I can't resist their bffery

Thanks for reading though! Sorry!

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